Critique my eye.
 

Tell me what you think, I always sucked at faces, so I thought I would work on faces one part at a time.

v1 http://home.houston.rr.com/frolic/eyetest.jpg

v2 http://home.houston.rr.com/frolic/eyetest2.jpg

needs to be wider through the middle and on the right (thats if its a right eye)

although that does look pretty cool

Looks nice, try making anime eyes, they are fun. :)

http://home.houston.rr.com/frolic/eyetest2.jpg

Adjusted a bit, look any better?

See above for closer comparison.

thats much, much better.

Thanks, how does this look when they come together?

http://home.houston.rr.com/frolic/eyetest3.jpg

Nift, although a tad bit unrealistic.

Nice, but your nose is too small. (but since this is "critique my eye" not "critique my nose"...)

It's good, I like the shine, gives a good eye texture. See the left eye, for example, how on the bottom left instead of rounding like an eye it goes "BLAM I BE A STRAIGHT LINE, YO'"? You should fix that, only thing I can see wrong, though (:

Looks nice. I like it. Don't change a thing. Well, maybe a thing. ;o

Reminds me of Gaara.

The nose is just there to give visual representation to the face build. :)

Ya, I notice that, my mouse is a baznatch sometimes, I'll fix it when I wake up.

Thanks :)

Who what where when or why is Gaara?

He's not a triple posting dolt. :frown:

http://www.miamihost.net/ims/u/thepe.../Gaara-008.jpg
Gaara of the sand
possesed kid from Naruto anime