Rate + Comments for Improvement
 

Hello.. This is a level I made when I was bored. Ignore the lighing effects and the giant waterfall. Im still working on those with Calani, But I would like to know how to improve the quality of this level. Please do not bash the level, but give me some comments and rate out of 10.. Thanks for your time..

I liked what you did with the walls.
The rest of the stuff was just average, nothing
too special.

Water fall is ugly. Ground looks average, I like the dark pot tiles. Walls are above decent, tables are ugly, that radio looks like it's in the way, covering each table with OSHT BEER! is kind of ugly, try candles?

6/10

He said ignore the waterfall.. as hard as it is.

Try putting something else on the tables, seriously.. gold doesn't match the overall dark appeal/look of that level

7/10

10/10, mang ;)

Should I replace the beers with like candles or something. Ill keep you posed on it.

Isnt that what I just said...?

Version 2!!
 

Heres some changes, I added some detail to floor, I removed beers and added candles, with flickering lights, added something better then radio :P and covered over the waterfall with a treetop2.gif... I still need help improving tho..

What I love to do is make a huge treetop.gif then set it to be very transperant but still showing. It looks good sometimes and sometimes it doesnt.

Those treetops look ugly though, maybe you can make them a LITTLE transperant and test that out? If not then just leave them there I guess.

Err, May you explain how to make them transparent ;o Im not script literate.

OT, it looked better with the waterfalls, eventhough the waterfalls make it look wierd lookin'.

It's a good level :)

I want to make the tree transparent partially but I dunno how ;o if you could explain it would help quite a bit.. zzz.

Play with the lighs, but change the light image to the treetop image. You'll eventually find it out

It's a pretty good level. Keep workin, you'll get even better!

<3 OasaTor >_<