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I made two levels for Worlds (that private server), the two houses are right above the mountain-cliff-thingy. I also included a "full screen" of the two houses so you can see the trees around it :x. I'm not anti tree I swear!


Rate and comments please ^_^;

Jordan says: Methinks tis a bit too plain in some areas, try adding some filler... Perhaps a few solid objects.

Well, awsome Crono ;)

Too plain for my taste. Not bad though.

the cliff/mountain stuffz looks neat =O

Nice, I quite like the detail, not to much but not to shabby :)
I dislike the path though, nice cliffing :)

The good:
-Cliffs
-Path edges

The bad:
-Houses
-Empty areas

good start though... if you spent as much time on the rest of the level, as you did on the cliffs, and path edges, it would be a great level...

Heh. Funny thing is, the pathes were just there. But the edgy loopy things are mine :x. I'll fill in some empty gaps with -something- and send you screenshots. Thanks everyone :)

Sorry for the double post but wanted to make this seperate from comments :p

I fixed the path, I think, comments? Suggestions?

Even more awsome ^^

Path's great; I'm surprised you havn't made a server or a huge map yet, i'd love to see the outcome :)

To tell you the truth I don't think I have the patience.

mmm... nice!

Paths:
The paths are great, these are what I refer to as 'sexy paths' because they look so cool. The shape of them is also good because its very windy which looks very good.

Houses:
Nice nice, I like this look at they are small and not over powering so you can fit alot into one level even with alot of houses.

Detail:
As people have said the detail in places is blank, but what you have it great, just a bit more of it around objects I think to make it all look more full.

Other:
Cliffs are great and look fine, and so do the trees, but maybe make the trees less square in their shape and put them over some of the blank bits so you don't have to put alot of detail.

Good good :D

Thanks Spark :D! What number rating would you give it?

7.5/10

I like the cliffs, and the paths (Did you just use the path gen though?)

The houses remind me of Val for some reason :)

Which path? Look at my third post, it has the new path. No I didn't use the path gen -_-; All hand placed.

seems strange that the front yards are unkept and shaggy whereas all the other ground is neat and prim, but I suppose you're not done detailing or so (even though I don't like overdetailing myself)

Good point o_o;

And a small update. Nothing much, just keep commenting as I go on. I like it when I get help from people while making levels. :)

Nice!, I see an error in the cliffs! :D

Where?

(ten words, ten words...)

10 letter lalalalala

Im not to fund with it :(,
5/10

Well if I should rate this level
9/10

Very kool.Add a little more detail and it will be perfect.

I think Gerami has improved alot... Hehe I remember at the start on this forum when I said I was a 1337 level maker :P, and Shadowless had some big problems with me on that area :P, you remember that Shadow, eh?
Hehe... It's fun that you have followed this forums for some time now, in years you notice how other players have became better in development areas.
Wan by the way I got my internet back so I can start working with you.

Crono has got alot better :)
And there is no point, don't.. :p, it's over..

why? its a perfectly good level minus the blankness...?

http://forums.graal2001.com/forums/a...chmentid=28276

You guys saw that one right? Ok..

Thanks for all the comments guys, I really appreciate it. When I get good comments and such I get motivated to keep on going. ^_^;

Yea,It reminds me of old G2k1.o_o

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someone post a level with all the cliff tiles please, im sick of looking for them thru the editor. i think someone posted one a LONG time ago, but im to lazy to look for it. so plz post it thxxx

Use your head
http://forums.graal2001.com/forums/s...ad.php?t=47045

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yea, thats hot ish wan, but i dont mean tutorials, im not ****ing retarted. =/ i meant an actual level (.nw .graal) that has all the cliff tiles already set up, so you dont gots to search. think kid, think

so you can steal :p
that tutorial is great :o
can't you find those tiles or somet? :p

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wan, you know im a lazy bastrd, but ill do it anyway, i rarely make levels so whatev doctor

if you're lazy i don't see the point in you even making levels..
they're not going anywhere i'm assuming? to me it sounds asif you're bored and you want to learn something but you can't be botherd x_x

I made the paths although there wasnt much time in them :)
I made the whole overworld as a matter of fact just so you know
:)
All those starting paths too, O_o that took a little while

As for your level as of your last post I like it alot except the houses
maybe they are too small for my liking?
With houses 4/10 without 7/10
That is if you expect average around 5/10

Wow, I'm away for about 48 hours and a thread goes to hell, how surprising... Sorry this is closed, either until I figure out who to deal with, or forever.