Graal Forums - How many of you RP

I just wanna know

And heres my RP story (I posted the same story on graalnet forums)
A Pirate always says they are a pirate at heart this was true, and hey sometimes a pirates last name is Pirate. This is a story of a boy a boy pirate and lets call this boy pirate DaggraPirate. This young man aways was in trouble by either pickpocketing or throwing cherry bombs down the toliets. When he was 17 of age he stolen a pirate ship, call the Sea Sapphire, he sailed around habor to habor with only him as a crew. Later he found himself a worthy pirate crew. They sailed the seas of Graalworld in seach for treasure and people to plunder. On one stormy night a night like no other the pirates found themselfs warring with the sea sadly there hull buckled ripping a hole into a side of the ship everyone was thrown overboard. A few years later a pale body washed upshore by a small wave. As the body regains his strength he reliezes that he fills rather lighter than he use to and to that his body has turned a pale white color. He looks beyond the shore to see his pirate ship, the Sea Sapphire, he swims over and climbs aboard. He noticed the mass has been torn as he walks below he sees a small water puddle coming from one of the crew quarters. As he walks in he sees what has caused the puddle a rather large hole as been ripped into the side of the boat. Without any tar or wood he drops anchor and begins regaining his might pirate crew. He walked into his cabin and looks into his mirror to only relieze his a ghost. He figures that his name means nothing other than a wet hat and a pair of torn pants. He called himself Ghost Pirate, since he has nothing left of his past life but his last name. He walked in a deep cave near the shore he washed up on. Deep inside he seen something nothing he could every imagion. A pit of lava with millions of burning screaming souls it was a source of great evil. He thinks awhile and comes to a conclusion that this is why his a ghost. He soon learns the black arts of Voodoo magic and figures out how to convert the tormented souls into a source for mana. He comes to find that the Pit of burning souls needs to bring new souls into the pit so he may convert them into mana. in Seach he comes across a race of underwater creatures know as the zormites. He sees that these creatures where more than just any sea life he seen but these creatures had a soul of pure engery (which might be the reason they was able to morph from human to fish) He begain reaping the creatures of their souls and throwing them into the Pit of Burning Souls. While the lifeless body was still there he figured he can eat it to gain little personal mana without having to take some from the pit. Now there are little more zormites left and they are getting tricky to find. Ghost Pirate must find a new source of mana to power his evil magic. Who will Ghost Pirate feed the pit next.........