Graal Forums

Graal Forums (https://forums.graalonline.com/forums/index.php)
-   Graphic Design (https://forums.graalonline.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?f=9)
-   -   Pen (https://forums.graalonline.com/forums/showthread.php?t=51324)

davidpsy 02-25-2004 03:40 PM

Pen
 
1 Attachment(s)
Well I got bored and made a pen tell me what you think, yes I know the end looks more like a small blade but the size was limited.


I'm gonna redo the end brb.

davidpsy 02-25-2004 03:44 PM

1 Attachment(s)
Ok I redid the pen its better now.

Destorm 02-25-2004 04:12 PM

The wood looks too rough, as if its been snapped off a branch and had a fountain pen nib stuck on it

davidpsy 02-25-2004 04:20 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Destorm
The wood looks too rough, as if its been snapped off a branch and had a fountain pen nib stuck on it
Well its supposed to be like forest wooden...

Destorm 02-25-2004 05:08 PM

pens are still smooth otherwise you would get a splinter everytime you tried to use it

Mykel 02-25-2004 05:15 PM

First one was better...
Get un-bored. Get Sanstrata done. >=/

:D

Darlene159 02-25-2004 06:16 PM

I like the first one better as well

Blitz_Hunter 02-25-2004 06:52 PM

*puts on glasses* Woah, there is something there. :p

haunter 02-25-2004 07:04 PM

It just a pen... ;o A pen with a jagged handle...

Monkeyboy_McGee 02-25-2004 07:31 PM

It's nice :)
Looks a lot like the GK writing pen, except more uh..vertical o_O

WanDaMan 02-25-2004 10:27 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by Monkeyboy_McGee
It's nice :)
Looks a lot like the GK writing pen, except more uh..vertical o_O

Yeah.
Remove the blackness and then show us it.

Spark910 02-25-2004 10:43 PM

Should put background as transparent, so we can see past the colour of the background, quite hard otherwise.

SlikRick 02-25-2004 11:02 PM

1st one looked better...I think(kinda hard to tell without a transparent background) just make it a little smoother and you got it I think ;)

LordZen 02-25-2004 11:46 PM

Yea things like that look more natural if they are not vertical or horizontal. Diagonal is preferable in my opinion.

Nick1988 02-25-2004 11:54 PM

They both don't look very much like pens.

Monkeyboy_McGee 02-26-2004 01:42 AM

Ooh, also, you should make the shading on the pen more curved....like, a slow gradient going up and then a steep gradient near the top, to make it a little more curved. I haven't looked very closely but it seems like just a straight line of lighter colour x_x
It needs to be sexy and curvacious ;)

davidpsy 02-26-2004 02:23 AM

1 Attachment(s)
Quote:

Originally posted by Monkeyboy_McGee
Ooh, also, you should make the shading on the pen more curved....like, a slow gradient going up and then a steep gradient near the top, to make it a little more curved. I haven't looked very closely but it seems like just a straight line of lighter colour x_x
It needs to be sexy and curvacious ;)


Ok hows this.

WanDaMan 02-26-2004 09:21 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by davidpsy



Ok hows this.

Do you read posts?

SlikRick 02-26-2004 10:47 AM

give it a transperant background x_x

davidpsy 02-26-2004 10:59 AM

1 Attachment(s)
Quote:

Originally posted by SlikRick
give it a transperant background x_x
ok heres your god damn transparent back ground lol :rolleyes:!!!!!!!1

SlikRick 02-26-2004 11:04 AM

Looks pretty good cuz now we can see the whole outline of the pen and stuff ;)

davidpsy 02-26-2004 11:09 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by SlikRick
Looks pretty good cuz now we can see the whole outline of the pen and stuff ;)
yay ^_^

Myomoto 02-26-2004 02:11 PM

it's cool :]

WanDaMan 02-26-2004 05:27 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by davidpsy


ok heres your god damn transparent back ground lol :rolleyes:!!!!!!!1

I like it with black now.
I'm sad.

Monkeyboy_McGee 02-26-2004 06:14 PM

Quote:

Originally posted by davidpsy


ok heres your god damn transparent back ground lol :rolleyes:!!!!!!!1

Heh, yes it looks totally sweet now dude. It's like...REAL ULTIMATE [pen] POWER!!!! Except, dunno if it's just me, but i feel it would look even better with either a black outline or a darker shade outline of some sort, now that i've seen it in transparent background :(

MrCharles 02-26-2004 09:43 PM

it hurts my eyes tro look at bc small

haunter 02-26-2004 10:38 PM

Eh, its just a pen... woop-dee-do... Nothing wrong with it though...

Myomoto 02-26-2004 10:39 PM

it needs an outline :O

davidpsy 02-27-2004 02:38 AM

Quote:

Originally posted by Myomoto
it needs an outline :O
Naa it gives it that 3D look without an outline ;).

SlikRick 02-27-2004 04:03 AM

You should make it a lil bit bigger ;)


All times are GMT +2. The time now is 01:33 PM.

Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.11
Copyright ©2000 - 2026, vBulletin Solutions Inc.
Copyright (C) 1998-2019 Toonslab All Rights Reserved.