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Well I got bored and made a pen tell me what you think, yes I know the end looks more like a small blade but the size was limited.
I'm gonna redo the end brb. |
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Ok I redid the pen its better now.
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The wood looks too rough, as if its been snapped off a branch and had a fountain pen nib stuck on it
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pens are still smooth otherwise you would get a splinter everytime you tried to use it
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First one was better...
Get un-bored. Get Sanstrata done. >=/ :D |
I like the first one better as well
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*puts on glasses* Woah, there is something there. :p
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It just a pen... ;o A pen with a jagged handle...
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It's nice :)
Looks a lot like the GK writing pen, except more uh..vertical o_O |
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Remove the blackness and then show us it. |
Should put background as transparent, so we can see past the colour of the background, quite hard otherwise.
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1st one looked better...I think(kinda hard to tell without a transparent background) just make it a little smoother and you got it I think ;)
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Yea things like that look more natural if they are not vertical or horizontal. Diagonal is preferable in my opinion.
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They both don't look very much like pens.
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Ooh, also, you should make the shading on the pen more curved....like, a slow gradient going up and then a steep gradient near the top, to make it a little more curved. I haven't looked very closely but it seems like just a straight line of lighter colour x_x
It needs to be sexy and curvacious ;) |
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Ok hows this. |
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give it a transperant background x_x
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Looks pretty good cuz now we can see the whole outline of the pen and stuff ;)
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it's cool :]
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I'm sad. |
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it hurts my eyes tro look at bc small
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Eh, its just a pen... woop-dee-do... Nothing wrong with it though...
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it needs an outline :O
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You should make it a lil bit bigger ;)
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