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Hi I made a level today and I would like rating and oppinions in eventual improvements

Thanks :)

It's very... Green... And... Plain... What's with the big green blotch on the right? Add more bushes, trees, perhaps a pond... And the grass-to-grass tiles look weird when they just end like that.

Its very nice.. a couple of tile errors and I still dont like the housing. Looks too odd with black holes.

Cliffing and detailing is nice though :)

Im not sure what you mean with blotch and also how am i supposed to do with the grass tiles then if i cant end them?

Also i added some trees and bushes :)

Blotch means like, an area, a large green spot...

And you can use custom graphics to end the grass thing, or connect the other end to something solid...

I still see alot of tile errors, and the detail is still pretty plain, all weed-grass pretty much...

how about this tehn :)

note: Thanks for help on house Wan :)

The bottom one is just the same level as the one beofre but an extra cave entrance and some of those like steeping stones outside a door.

The house is great, but doesn't suit the level.

Yeah and swamp and different tree style :O

(Sorry for double posting)

Heres another update, using more different tiles this time :)

I think you did a nice job on it, I don't like the two different styles of paths merged, but that is just me. Anyway, where the upper-grass ends, it just... ends, mabey you should do something with it. Other then that, all I see is one little error, mabey it isn't, with the cliff. It is dark, then on the diagional, it goes a lighter version of it. I think there is another set of tiles for that, not sure.

But all-in-all, it is a good level.

The level looks good but the house doesnt fit the theme of the level(like spark said) and add some detailing to the blank green spaces. I also see a few tile errors that would be eas to fix.

Well, they don't need to be cascaded all the time.

I like the level better now. I dont mind level with a it less detail. Depending what its use for. Yet yeah.. house dosnt fit in.


Good work though :)

Woah, i really like it.
It's not the same thing over and over, it's really good.

Cliffs are horrid...
House is mostly good.
Path is awsome.
Everything else is meh.

thanks for the suggestions :), also
i want to thank everybody who rated my level :rolleyes: :rolleyes: :rolleyes: :rolleyes:

The house is amazing, I give praise for (!)Wan(DaMan) -He uses many name's I see..
Overall it's a good level. Your a good LAT keep up the good work :)
7.5/10

6/10

Cliffs and up is very nice.
House looks decent.
Path is very nice.

Detailing below the cliffs is below average. Looks too patchy. Too forced.