level, i think...
 

rate 1-10,hi

Better than alot of levels i've seen. I think the problem might be that everything is far too spread out, try to put your things in clumps, grass near a few bushes, etc... Try to keep your mushrooms near solid objects rather than out in the open, sometimes cliffs or trees work well.

i see
 

thanks for input, im trying to fix detailing now, also, id like to thank eric for his cliff tutorials. wihthout those, id never be abel to do what i do. thanks

The cliffs could use some work, the puddle water stuff doesn't mix well either.

Grass detailing is over-doing it. We need to be able to walk.

It's a bit cluttered and there's many tile errors.
I like it though. It is a nice level.

I too think its a little cluttered.
The cliff are good.. but to me they feel to unatureal. They don't flow. There like 90 degree bends. And a few tile errors.

Yet I think it's really good start to a level.

4.5/10

Well bad detail, it also kinda looks like a maze. :p
Am I the only one that see's it?

4/10

Simple maze... For simple minds perhaps?... :rolleyes:

perhaps!

Don't be such an ******* about it, he asked for an opinion. Not an insult.

You need to lighten up... Or settle down... One or the other... I was only joking, geez.

Try joking with more enthusiasm

I'd really rather not, but thanks for the advice anyway.

Welcome, I would take that suggestion though, It might help you out later in life. ;)

XD

:rolleyes: What the hell was the point in posting that?

It's called getting a higher post count.

Okay then

You see, there's this thing called spam, which is basicly posting mundane things, such as you just did... It's not a habit to get into.

I know, it's starting to piss me off, I want to hit these people with sticks. :mad:

Can I be first!? :rolleyes:

I think the level would look better with less grass =X

Hey, you're right... In the lower right corner... Add some dirt or something.

Not trying to break the forum rules, but I think we'd use a firearm instead of a stick for you. :rolleyes:

I think he wanted to beat the people with sticks first, not be beat.

Yeah.. That's it. Glory just to use to jumping to conclusions I guess. :)

Indeed, especially because you've been negative towards me in the past. :)

*Doesn't Recall This* :confused:

HAHHAHHA SIMPLE MAXZE 4 SIMPLE MINDZ HAHAA LOL MJJK JK ROFL :rolleyes: :rolleyes: :rolleyes: ;) ;)

jk.

5/10 I don't like the small trees, the cliffs are to straight, otherwise, it's pretty good

I'll chip in my two cents- the cliffs do look a bit unatural- they're too angled, and there are too many indentions for my taste, but hey, what do I know?

more like 5 cents -_-

6.6743-

could get a higher rating from me, but I feel its too chaotic. The level does not flow well and has random objects placed around the level. I see a few errors also. Good start with the cliffs and water, but you made a mistake by using so many random tiles throughout the rest of the level. This level could be fixed easily.