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NeoJenova 08-03-2003 04:49 AM

My Level!
 
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Here is one of my levels I made earlier today this is my first level I have posted that was made by me so... gimme some input.

Rate from 1 to 10 1= lowest 10 = highest

If you don't like it give me some pointers on how I can get better.

Thanks.

Shaun 08-03-2003 08:47 AM

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I would fix all the tile errors (water not connecting right, bushes in trees) and I would have it so that fences were meaningful. I don't know who would go through the effort of putting up fences in the middle of nowhere like that really. Maybe you could put houses there too, which would give more activity on the level. I don't care for your house, but I don't take off marks for stuff like that because it's all a matter of preference.

NeoJenova 08-03-2003 10:38 AM

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Originally posted by Shaun
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I would fix all the tile errors (water not connecting right, bushes in trees) and I would have it so that fences were meaningful. I don't know who would go through the effort of putting up fences in the middle of nowhere like that really. Maybe you could put houses there too, which would give more activity on the level. I don't care for your house, but I don't take off marks for stuff like that because it's all a matter of preference.

Ouch...

[edit] I guess I gotta get out of the level making ice age and start making my levels more up to date I dunno, I guess this level might have been good maybe.... 1 year ago atleast higher then a 2 :( [/edit]

SingleChance 08-03-2003 11:01 AM

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Originally posted by NeoJenova


Ouch...

[edit] I guess I gotta get out of the level making ice age and start making my levels more up to date I dunno[/edit]

or try making levels without tile errors :p

Snakeandy7 08-03-2003 12:37 PM

lol, that level has alot of tile errors:(, o-well nice try 5/10 Goodjob, paradox try helping neo (But i think you dislike him?.), Anywho try to.. You work on the same server :)
Hrmm, if you need any help forum pm me;)

syltburk 08-03-2003 03:55 PM

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Originally posted by SingleChance


or try making levels without tile errors :p

haha paradox ish funny

Myomoto 08-03-2003 04:08 PM

ugh, the level design is good, but it's full of tileerros dude... ._.

Matman58 08-03-2003 06:05 PM

I would give it a 5/10, just fix up the tile errors. Also has shaun said the fence posts just seem kinda out of place.

NeoJenova 08-03-2003 08:51 PM

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Originally posted by SingleChance


or try making levels without tile errors :p

Nah, we are good friends he is just being a weirdo! :p

Eric_1337 08-03-2003 08:57 PM

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Originally posted by NeoJenova


Nah, we are good friends he is just being a weirdo! :p

Negetive, he said to me that he hated u and wanted u to committ suicide =-o! uh-oh.

NeoJenova 08-03-2003 09:02 PM

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Originally posted by Eric_1337


Negetive, he said to me that he hated u and wanted u to committ suicide =-o! uh-oh.


Really!! omigarsh uber 1337 rox0r!

SingleChance 08-03-2003 10:55 PM

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Originally posted by Eric_1337


Negetive, he said to me that he hated u and wanted u to committ suicide =-o! uh-oh.

lol wtf


anyways
but for real nj i'd give the level a 5/10 considering you don't make levels much....you just gotta take your time and watch the tile errors....

Snakeandy7 08-03-2003 11:43 PM

When you have done a level, look through for tile error's works for me sometimes :p

cloudstrifevii 08-04-2003 12:49 AM

It's good except for the trees....when they are linked together horizontally it's kind of....blarg.


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