Rate my level.
 

I made this about a month ago and since everyone posts their levels here..I decided to join the 1337 crew (lol o_o) and post my not-so-good levels.

I need this to be rated and need advice. Thanks in advance. ^_^!

And here it is in game. (Since the top one doesn't show the waterfall/npcs...

Re: Rate my level.
 

You're absolutely right here, dude.

Yeah, well tell me how to improve rather than ignoring everything else I posted.

on a scale of 1 to 10, 4...
Hmm... the waterfal seems to change color when it goes from tileset to NPC, the river at the top looks wierd, dunno why, i just think it looks wierd. Add some more stones at the lake and some stones and mushrooms at the ground :) And those two bushes at the trees, remove one of em, they stand like they where statues placed by people... I don't know art, but i know what i like! (Translation, i can't do levels! :P)

I really like the idea of being able to be seen behind a waterfall. But perhaps a chair wasn't the best way to go about it.

Let me fix them up according to both of your posts..

What should I add behind the waterfall, though?

A cave, duh! :p

I meant..instead of a chair..I still like my chair idea :[

Add chair out side of the waterfall, a little bit away from it, like making some kind of rest place to meditate near the shound of the waterfall :)

Ok I fixed some stuff..until I find out what to do with the waterfall (its drawoverplayer; and semi-transperant) i'm leaving it there :X!

I kinda like it then i dont know. i dont know what i like ;o, anywho its nice, btw i am !Wan's Brother Chrono, hehe:p

if you just remove the waterfall tiles & leave the npc, it should be fine there.. but the side of the cliff & the sides of the river seem waaay too repetitive to me. :x
5/10

Ok, I edited some stuff. Any better :X?

And here it is in game..

Sorry, but dont change it anymore, they dislike the level, you and i like it.. (well i like it :D), You have your style they haver there's *Dunno if they can make level's*
Anyhow, nice level;)
If you want me n Wan will help you on it, Wan will talk to you on Val :p

Much better that wins a 6,5/10! try as CheeToS said, don't use waterfall tiles, just use the NPC :) And move the chair outside the waterfall :o
I love the work with mushrooms and stones! Good level! :)