Goblin
 

A goblin sprite I am working on. I wanted to see how it looked before i moved on to walking and other directions. Constructive critiscizm(sp?) wanted.

Looks like Oasis Character *laughs*

Seriusly thought it folows same pattern x.X Also Arm that's to the side is bad, it looks too short...

more shading X_X it looks really bad shading wise cept for pants i know i must sound like a living anus saying this but i'd redo the shading and pick a place where the light is comming from like when you sketch so it look better and yeah...i think thats it o yeah the club is a little lob sided try and make it a little more smoother X_X man i just basically told you to re do the whole thing damn i hate myself:mad:

It's cute. It doesn't need to be shaded if you don't want it to be, but you might want to bring out the depth a bit more or make him a bit more chubby :asleep:

Agreed.

I think it looks good. Maybe more shaded around the inner part of his slightly raised arm would look neat. Make a chubby one also,

*stops and realizes Birdbird just posted* heh

Yes, chubbier is better. You don't need the darkoutline to be so thick either, you probably tried rounding it about and ended up making thicker

-.-

Lol that looks like an old SA char. But its kool.

Looks nice, but:
1) arm is unnatural as said
2) can you imagine someone holding a club like that? i mean, can it actually fight holding it like that?
3) the club is a little short, isn't it?

Also, get rid of the pants and give hem those tarzan thingy pants... you know, cloth and a rope.

Looks cool, add some depth and more colors. Contrast seems off.

It does :o

I made the goblin and i swear i have never seen the other two in my life X_x.

Sorry if it looks like yours, it looks kinda the same size but my shading is messed up on the stomach, and the goblin doesnt look anything like the humans... I dont see how it looks stolen.

And this is coming from a guy who said he has lv. 5 RC on Arch lol