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Rate it plz!!!!!

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Jaffer

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k, i will name a couple things wrong/need changes, starting from the top, and working down. The little 'pond/water' thing in the top-right corner, has a couple of tile errors, then add in the squarish nature of the water, it looks horrible. Top-right corner, tile errors in the trees. Around the middle, there is alot of tile errors, and the change between shallow dirt, and deep dirt looks good only if you use them alot together, not one tile, and thats it. The water at the bottom corner is...standard, nothing special. The grass overall is OK, but needs improvement, you overused that tall grass deal. Finally the house. Its not all that bad, just the bottom part, around the bench is wierd. A couple tile errors on the house, and next time use a bush roof, with a black boarder.

Rating 4/10

Ok here goes, you have a few tileerrors! The trees, also you dont need to put the thcik grass corner bits there they look horrible!

House:
This is fine and intresting instead of just a ready made house so you scrore points on that!

Grass:
This is not as nice as rest of the level! It seems to me in some places its blank and in others it not, also it seems very repeative and gets boring!

Paths/Water:
This if fine, although the path is boring after a while and should have some water or something different somewhere on it. The water is fine and so are most of the trees.

Originality:
Other than the house which is nice, the rest isnt that intresnt and seems ''dry'' and ''dull'' but its well put together but needs to be a bit better.

Sparks Rating: 6/10
-Its a high score as its the best ive seen from you so far, but still room for improvment:

Attachment:
Look at the highlighted bits, there are no need for these, the only time you need them are if you are going to connect it to another bit of thick path and not to a thin bit again!