making Mall
 

i am making a mall and i was wanting to see what you like of it so far and i also need some shops if anyone would like to donate some and please i am asking this because i do not have much time on the computer now but as soon as i can get more time i wll make some levels i just am asking foor some help

Before everyone starts asking here is a screenshot.

Now to the level, umm, ya... trees are terrible, take them out.
White floor, terrible, unless you add other tiling to incorporate.
Blue floor, terrible...

Just really bad combinations and how you put them together.

And those repeating tables:|....

Rating:1/10

Tile error my freind, tile errors.


Straight my freind, straight.

boring my freind, boring.

Sorry my freind, sorry.


rating my freind,:1.2/10


But my freind, dont give up.

Keep working and feel the hope my freind, feel the hope.

Try and put walls around the whole level, also dont put floor tiles around grass/trees without a border of a little wall.

Re: making Mall
 

Next time post a screenshot.
Rating:0/10 :(

Re: Re: making Mall
 

thats kinda harsh, :)
0.4/10 from me
do what they said

im sorry.....0.1/10, you get .1 for figuring out how to open the editor. If you're going to put trees inside with no grass, you MUST use the tree gfx...just...theres so much....ahhh.

..I'll be honest. That's worse than what I could make x.x! Don't just use predefined tiles nonstop, add trees with GRASS TILES in the middle of floor, and wtc. Be creative with tiles. And, I'm not rating it, but here's a tip. If you want to use Grass Tiles indoors, put a border around it, as shown in the pic of my NPC test level. *points to attachment*

looks like im gunna be workin some more

You should.... keep working on it, keep practicing! Bomy Moon wasn't built in a day, you know.

I don't like the way the green lines border the bottom of it... but it's a test level and being more of a scripter than a level maker myself i can see where nobody would care ^_^

Just for the sake of our new little apprentice, or whatever.

9/10, now just fix that pie icon, lol :p