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Timpan3 11-23-2002 10:58 PM

One of my older outside levels..
 
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Some people has probably already seen this, but I kinda like it, so I'm gonna post it up for rate again, anyway, here it is.

(Note : Might be some tile errors, because I haven't checked it that much , really.)

Mista_Micro 11-24-2002 12:46 AM

i like 9/10

Mykel 11-24-2002 12:50 AM

pretty good, 8-10

AlexH 11-24-2002 01:16 AM

I'm not to fond of the grass detail.
It looks way to messy for my liking.
Other than that it's nice.

Spark910 11-24-2002 01:28 AM

House:
This is interesting, It may be a bit big though, bit nice usage of tiles here, although you could do something with that shadow as it doesn't fit that well, as it just stops in a line and looks weird, although in real life I suppose it would!

Grass:
This is good, but not brilliant, in front of the house it looks too much like odd random tiles just placed to fill in the spaces, maybe you should have spent more time on this.

Trees:
Trees are nice, they fit in well, but you dont really need the treetop IMG NPC at the top do you?

Lights:
Nice, maybe have some odd ones as lanters infront of the house and not just on it!


Sparks Rating: 7/10
It would be more, but the grass detail lef you down. But anyway this is an old level and you have learnt from your mistakes!

Mykel 11-24-2002 01:50 AM

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Originally posted by Spark910
House:
This is interesting, It may be a bit big though, bit nice usage of tiles here, although you could do something with that shadow as it doesn't fit that well, as it just stops in a line and looks weird, although in real life I suppose it would!

Grass:
This is good, but not brilliant, in front of the house it looks too much like odd random tiles just placed to fill in the spaces, maybe you should have spent more time on this.

Trees:
Trees are nice, they fit in well, but you dont really need the treetop IMG NPC at the top do you?

Lights:
Nice, maybe have some odd ones as lanters infront of the house and not just on it!


Sparks Rating: 7/10
It would be more, but the grass detail lef you down. But anyway this is an old level and you have learnt from your mistakes!

he posted this on CB forums too, he is trying out

Timpan3 11-24-2002 01:57 AM

Yeah, I saw the grass detailing, but as I said, I didn't check it BEFORE I posted it, so forgett the oddness about that, or atleast try, heh.. :)

Aknts 11-24-2002 03:16 AM

4/10

cloudstrifevii 11-24-2002 07:37 AM

Magnificent, 8/10

Cid_Night 11-24-2002 07:50 AM

hmmm, dont like the grass much...it seems like you just took every grass detail you could find and tossed it in there. Ummm...the house is nice, and kind of original, but use of those little square boxes is overdone (you know, the little blocker tiles) But overall, it's a pretty nice level.

6/10

Masah 11-24-2002 08:07 AM

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Originally posted by Aknts
4/10
Yea no one's levels compare to yours :rolleyes:

-Brett

Aknts 11-24-2002 08:11 AM

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Originally posted by Masah


Yea no one's levels compare to yours :rolleyes:

-Brett


Why can't I post my opinion?

Waltz5 11-24-2002 08:55 AM

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Originally posted by Masah


Yea no one's levels compare to yours :rolleyes:

-Brett

Well that one sure doesn't compare to Justin's.

People are being way too generous on rating people's levels.

Aknts 11-24-2002 12:56 PM

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Originally posted by Waltz5

Well that one sure doesn't compare to Justin's.

People are being way too generous on rating people's levels.

Thanks for backing me up.

Knuckles 11-24-2002 01:27 PM

O_o... Are you the same person from AIM?

Timpan3 11-24-2002 05:56 PM

Yeah I am, and Aknts, could you tell me what makes you rate it like that, so I could improve it? Ofcourse, the grass detailing needs to be redone.

Aknts 11-24-2002 09:55 PM

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Originally posted by Timpan3
Yeah I am, and Aknts, could you tell me what makes you rate it like that, so I could improve it? Ofcourse, the grass detailing needs to be redone.
Yes the grass is mainly well its equal with the house b/c its is so big and so ugly.

Waltz5 11-24-2002 11:46 PM

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Originally posted by Aknts


Yes the grass is mainly well its equal with the house b/c its is so big and so ugly.

I agree, big does not mean better. Big houses/castles are usually terrible. I also think you used a wide variety of tiles in the house, and some of the colors clash, use some common sense when making a house and don't use tons of colors.

Timpan3 11-25-2002 12:30 AM

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Originally posted by Waltz5

common sense

Wow what a preach!

Mykel 11-25-2002 06:36 AM

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Originally posted by Timpan3


Wow what a preach!

:p yea, really...common sense? thats his style, common sense? :p


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