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Timpan3 09-26-2002 10:18 PM

Outside house
 
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Rate and comment this outside house I made, myself? I think it's decent, but that's probably because I like the style.

AlexH 09-26-2002 10:22 PM

I don't like the water at all.
You should make it into walkable tiles and have the little windows as small doors and have the place where the water is as a balcony.

Timpan3 09-26-2002 11:01 PM

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Remade it, take a look

AlexH 09-27-2002 12:43 AM

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Originally posted by Timpan3
Remade it, take a look
Looks better.
Try adding a little something to the back.
It looks to straight compared to the rest of the building.

Timpan3 09-27-2002 12:59 AM

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Originally posted by AlexH


Looks better.
Try adding a little something to the back.
It looks to straight compared to the rest of the building.

Ok I did, take a look at this

Timpan3 09-27-2002 02:40 AM

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Originally posted by Timpan3

Ok I did, take a look at this

Come on I want some more comments

WanDaMan 09-27-2002 03:43 AM

Nnice i like;)

Timpan3 09-27-2002 03:45 AM

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Originally posted by WanDaMan
Nnice i like;)
Thanks :D Now come on people, I want feedback on my current house skills :O

2nd time.

Timpan3 09-29-2002 02:22 AM

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Originally posted by Timpan3

Thanks :D Now come on people, I want feedback on my current house skills :O

2nd time.


MysticalDragonP2P 09-29-2002 02:24 AM

I don't like it at all, The boarder looks terrible and the green hedge top looks bad too,
Don't use that block hege that your doing, looks bad
Rating = .5/10

WanDaMan 09-29-2002 03:07 AM

Hmm looks like a 2002 level 1 of those big houses...;)

Timpan3 09-29-2002 03:26 AM

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Originally posted by WanDaMan
Hmm looks like a 2002 level 1 of those big houses...;)
Now THAT is a good comment (i hope)

Timpan3 09-29-2002 04:53 AM

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A continuation of the village

WanDaMan 09-29-2002 04:56 AM

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Originally posted by Timpan3

Now THAT is a good comment (i hope)

yUP ,AND YES IT LOOKS BETTER;)
sOZ CAPS LOL
hmm add grass detail;)
add trees around that'll look good

Timpan3 09-29-2002 05:24 AM

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Originally posted by WanDaMan

yUP ,AND YES IT LOOKS BETTER;)
sOZ CAPS LOL
hmm add grass detail;)
add trees around that'll look good

Im actually working on that, and the trees fits in nicely :D but the detailing isnt done yet so I wont post it here, get on AIM and Ill show ya.

Judge_Spunky 09-29-2002 01:14 PM

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Originally posted by Timpan3

Ok I did, take a look at this

Your house is tilted. The wooden poles go 1 less tile downward on the left, compared to the right hand side.

Also, I highly dislike the overall look of the house, probably mainly because of the use of the hedge (is it a hedge) tiles for the roof. I am quite reluctant to use those tiles, because of their black outline.
That outline has taken some of the "pzazz" away from you level.
4/10 - Even though I don't like it, it still is creative.

Timpan3 09-29-2002 02:53 PM

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Originally posted by Judge_Spunky


Your house is tilted. The wooden poles go 1 less tile downward on the left, compared to the right hand side.

Also, I highly dislike the overall look of the house, probably mainly because of the use of the hedge (is it a hedge) tiles for the roof. I am quite reluctant to use those tiles, because of their black outline.
That outline has taken some of the "pzazz" away from you level.
4/10 - Even though I don't like it, it still is creative.

That does it , I will be seeing you after class :D Just kidding.

WanDaMan 09-29-2002 03:17 PM

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Originally posted by Timpan3

Im actually working on that, and the trees fits in nicely :D but the detailing isnt done yet so I wont post it here, get on AIM and Ill show ya.

carnt babysitting>.
yeh he hurt me mentally! (unclasified reasons....)...seya tonight Spunky!

Timpan3 09-29-2002 03:38 PM

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Originally posted by WanDaMan

carnt babysitting>.
yeh he hurt me mentally! (unclasified reasons....)...seya tonight Spunky!

Yeah, (wan, this time, YOU take the shotgun withyou, but hide it IN the trunk.)


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