Rate meh Lebel Plz..
 

Here rate away...
1-10
and what i need to do...

I've seen this done a lot, add more detail.. or maybe try to attach it :p.

wtf i swear i...well anyway...

:p :p :p

For some reason I don't like that house, it just looks.. weird..

The two parts going vertical look extremely large with the horizontal one is so small... I don't know, just doesn't look good to me.

Otherwise it's pretty good though.

grrr'

what out of 10?
thx for suggestions tho...

I'd give it a 3/10 not to be mean. It just seems so cluttered. get rid of all the crud flowers bushes kill the little stone tile completely. Then readd the detail on the grass but make it in clumps as if there is a patch of tall grass growing agains a stair case etc... (an example of how it would look) Just think of how things grow in real life. Bushes grow in clumps not all over the place. Everything is to square so to speak. To many straight lines. I would get rid of all the pottedplants up in the corner. Why would there be cluster of potted plants outside? the little cliff on the bottom doesnt make sense. The main thing I would work on is the grass detail and bushes etc.. the cliff tree's etc.. Can do ok how they are if they have decent grass detail to support it.

ok thx man...

No problem. :) It shows good potential.

whats wrong with clutter i love clutter

it's cluttered.

soo whats wrong with clutter other than its clutter

mmmmkay: CLUTTER=LOOKS LIKE ****. But umm, yes another LAT Admin who makes bad levels. Go Mistorica!

Can't wait to read that review :p

heh...thats funny cuz we already passed one...heh
and why do you guys have to be jackasses?
i said rate 1-10 and gimme reccomendations, not be pricks, kthxbye

The house is kinda weird, I'd change that.
There's too many rocks in the path for my liking.
The grass detail is to disorderly and doesn't look good at all. :(
A few tile erros that I can spot (like one in fence to right)

Fix those up and it should be good. :)

ok what would you suggest with the house...?
till errors...x.x, i will fix...
i will get rid of all the rocks in the grass to try to make it look less cluttered and i will clutter grass in spots to make look more natural...
thx for recomandations

made some adjustments...
i need recomendations with the house tho...
sry for double post

k
 

I still dont like the table in the road XO

XD...meh likes it tho Myth...:)

.....there are tons of people who keep puting down ppl
if you dont want to post something good or help to improve then DONT POST IT

yea really...
saying OMG it sucks...juss doesnt help anyone...
and it makes you look like a ****....

Oh well,Im gonna rate the both because iam so nice :) Even though they are the same im gonna rate both to see better worse etc etc ... bla bla bla,you know what I mean with that.

First Screenshot :
Don't use path generator,it's worse than donkey balls.
The house is the worst thing on the level on my opinion. :(
I spot a million tile errors on it :( If you tile the brick tiles correctly
you can get a house without those million tile errors.
What's with the bush above yellow tree?
Is there a point to have that predefinied (sp?) cliffs below the connected green trees? You better remove them,they suck.
Keep 2 of the rocks left,or less and put them so noone can walk on them,In my opinion I hate them they're annoying,but I won't remove points for that.
Clutter,that's one of the biggest things on the level.
What's with the chair on the tree stump?
And what's with the jule cliffs?
What's with the lamp out in nowhere?
And fix the table it's predefinied (sp?).
I would give that one 2/10,It has good potential.

Second Screenshot :
Oh well not many think as me but I would keep the path style to it's own and not use two since I don't like that.But I wont remove points for that,since oh well not many think the same as me.
Remove the lamp in nowhere,and change the table as I said on first one.
The house looks even worse now. :(
Nice pond,could get some tile errors fixed.
Remove the purple rock,it's clutter.
Remove the lamps,I forgot the other two's but I'll reput it here.Remove the lamps they're just clutter.
Remove the chair on tree stump and jule cliff.They suck.
I don't think any agree with this with me;It's overdetailed.
Too much clutter on both.Remove many of the mushrooms
they're annoying when you walk around.
What's with the stakes in nowhere?
And nice tile error fixes on this one.
This one gets 4/10
Also has good potential :)

Whew,that took a while.

ok thx man

No problem ;) just a long review :D

but really? 2 and 4 out of 10.....that doesnt leave much room for levels that just blatently suck....

I know that's why I rated them so low :D,they do suck.
You can do better Mykel,trust me,they do suck.

O.o...thats not very nice...
i've seen a lot worse....but thx for review anyway...anyone else?

Too many flowers and mushrooms, definetly get rid of a lot of those. And if you are going to put lots of tiling try to make it more random and zig-zaggy. I would change the house and get rid of the lamp, table, jule cliffs, and (since I hate the things) the gravestones, make them into a nice garden or something aesthetically pleasing. The water is cool but you might want to get rid of the red tree right next to it, doesnt mix. I agree with a lot of the other people, too much clutter. Try to find a balance, get rid of the purple rock and unless those fences are absolutley necessary, can em. Maybe add some swamp tiles here and there they look kind of nice. You may want to consider downsizing that house it takes up a lot of space, and did I mention less mushrooms and no fences? You could put cooler stuff where the extra house stuff was like maybe another little pond or something. Add a little pond with waterfall or something on top of the house with some lighting effects and maybe treetop.gif around it itd be cool, also you may want to consider changing the roof tiles to the chimney house ones they are easier to work with in my opinion. I would give the rating a 3.5/10, it is a nice level for a playerhouse or something just needs some work. Keep at it though.