Shadow World
 

I'm Posting this for Tsunami Hunter.

Tsunami Hunter:

Howdy, I am Tsunami Hunter, and I am starting a server called Shadow Worlds. And I need some staff. Here is my storyline so far, enjoy.

You come to the city of Baolen, sent by your Mother and Father. To Join the shadows.The shadows, being the peacekeepers of the world, the moderators of nation's querrils, both feared and respected, warriors.

As you enter the massive city you are amazed by its vastness with its many shops, having each their own unqiue items. You were rather amazed when you bought an apple that could sing songs as you ate it.

As you walk in the massive streets going to the golden hall in which the order of the shadow reside , you feel a cool breeze of the afternoon as you feel more alive then ever. There are many goblins and pixes fighting in the middle of the road, and golems having to break it up. You see a tall dark man try to sell you an orange that signs like it has been singing for several years in a row, it sounds quiet distressed.

You suddenly notice a large moat around the golden dome-shaped building filled with a golden water that made the air smell like peaches, suddenly you wonderd if those would sing aswell. You get into a small boat with other children the same age as you just about, 15 or sixteen years of age. All scared and nervous looking as too what would happen to them. But you knew, you were to be trained by the shadows, you would be trained to save lives, and take them. You would be trained to be one of the greatest warriors the world would ever know, you will be a legend, a legend above all others.

But for now, all your thinking about is if this boat would tip over into the water and if peaches could sing.As you enter the massive hall you see many people of your age, you see them dressed in robes, black with a blue symbol in the center, meaning apprentice in shumoa. And on those black robes are golden pictures of angels holding swords on one shoulder, and demons seemly trying to charge at the angels on the other shoulder. You walk with other to-be apprentices of the shadow order to the mess hall, in which they would eat their breakfast, lunch, and supper every evening. A tall women was standing there, dressed in more formal looking purple robes and her hair up in a bun walked over to them hastily.

She says her name is Flachter, she is 3rd in command of the Shadows, and a powerful one at that. She led all the soon-to-be-apprentices to their dorms, and to the sparring rooms, to the meditaton chambers, and she made a note in a rather stern voice that the fith floor is forbidden to students unless authorized, because the very high-level meetings and diplomacy missons take place up there. Then you go back to the mess hall, and she gives each of you a card, a card with a number, she tells you to find your seats, and you go to your seat. Sitting opposite the table sat a man, with a rather medium hight, lean and bony, but he looked very strong. He said he will be your master.

If you like that and want to help me on my server, it will be a world in which you will grow more powerful as you take lessons from your master, travel with him/her and discover a great evil the lies within the shadows.

It will have many little fun things to do - Explore a massive world- Talking/singing fruit!- Hopefully voice acting for npc chars.- Custom bodies.- Custom weapons, Many different ways of transportation.Several Unique ways of fighting, from hand-to-hand combat, to using spears. All of this, hopefully, coming soon.

What I need in the way of staff:Good LATs, send me 2 levels inside, 2 levels outside.Good GFX, Send me 3 examples of your work, needs to be good at tiles.AlsoSomeone who can make music/has a mic in which they can use voice samples.Good NATs who have a variety of skills. as most should!I'll also need an admin for each of these, I might want ET later, but not to sure as to if I want events on the server. My e-mail is: [email protected] and my aim is TsunamiOfDoom. Please contact me with suggestions/comments. Or if you want to help, I am also open to suggestions on how to spell correctly, because I am quiet lacking in that abilty!

DO YOU THINK PEOPLE WILL TAKE TIME TO READ THAT?!?!?!?

Going to insults are we? Now who's the second grader...

lol
 

i know i didnt read it...started to then was like..ummm
ok ...no

So you're saying that as soon as you're done passing 2nd grade you just BAM stop insulting people, no. You don't have to be in 2nd grade to make insult someone.

You deserve what he said to you, you posted something that had nothing to do with the thread or pw at all and if you look at it you would see that its not that long and could probably finish it in less then 1-3mins.

God! act like an adult once... settle your disputes in a move grown up way... man ur acking like my cousin... and he's going into 2nd... :o and i was letting you know to shorten down ur posts cause it's just wasting time... people may start to read it but won't even finish 1/5 of it

Sush. You are not one to talk in this situation. Just leave it alone, and do not speak for the majority.

Quite the origonal name. ;)

I got to the third line and just gave up.. Break it down into paragraphs or something.. anyway, it seems boring and too much to read, too much detail isn't always a good thing.

It wasnt Tsunami Hunter talking or else I would have put Tsunami Hunter:, Whipenie4 is my account (Misfit) when i post and it doesnt say a name that means its me.

And i'll put Tsunami's post in paragraphs

ok i read it and it sounds aloooooooooooot like harry potter, like eerily like harry potter...especially the part where you get into the boat with the other scared little kids and go across the magical river to the other side...i dunno...

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wow i just finished reading it and it is harry potter...exactly...the woman whos 3rd in command or whaterver...is proffesor mcgonagal...the the 5th floor thats off limits is the 3rd floor thats off limits...comeon now

Around that, and right after that, it sounds like he just ripped harry potter and changed learning witchcraft/sorcery into "shadow training" he even put in the woman with her hair in a bun. :p

How exactly does this plot work for everyone on the server? I'm sure not everyone is going to have the same master, eat the same fruit, etc. The story needs to be universal I think. This isn't an offline rpg, this is online.

By the way, voice actors? Pfftt.. what a silly idea. For one, I highly doubt it would sound professional, and two, the voice files (probably wavs) would end up being like 200mb+ in size if you actually had a lot of voice acting in the game.

pwned! :P