rate my first level
 

rate it please

and no i didnot do this on purpose im just dumb -.O

here is the pic

4/10

Nice house design, the path is too plain and the whole level is too plain. Add alot more tiles and stuff to the grass, some trees, bushes, ect.

here i fixed some of the level up to make it look better

The dirt looks very plain. Maybe you could add some grass or rocks into it. Plus alot of the grass edges look too straight.

5/10

better then my 1st level was, but its still bland. keep at it, youll get better. 7/10 fer effort

rate this i fixed it again for the 3rd time??

tell me what else i need to do

Clump. Your. Detail.

^_^
 

Kojiro: This is good for a begginer I remember when I got into levels and couldnt bearly make an inside or outside and dinit know how to link X.x but for effort i give 6/10 keep building man!!

It still needs lots of detail. Add in some rocks to the dirt or more clumps of grass. Like the others said, that is good for a begginer =)

next time you could delete the double post and edit your first one.
But the first screenie I see, is pretty bad, but the house is nice :)
5/10
for your second shot I am gunna lower the rating, #1 you used a predefined lamp, make the base of the lamp, then take an NPC and make its img bluelampani.png and then for script:

NPC Code:

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if (playerenters) dontblock;

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And the second reason, you used backpal instead of seteffect -_-
use this:

NPC Code:

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seteffect 0,0,0,.3;

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for about the same effect.Rating 4/10
And for your last screenie, I'll give it 7/10, its better.Remove the dirt holes in the top corner.And make more detail closer together :)

its better than most of the other things on here :rolleyes:
but The only thing I see wrong is that there is no detail, and the dirt path is too big... I don't think people would walk all the way around that to get to that house... put some mroe grass clumps and flowers in there 3/10

ok i fixed the level again ^_^

It looks better every time you post it, but there are still some very plain areas.


Red: Too plain
Blue: Something I don't like about this area, but I'm not sure what x.x

you really need to shorten up on the dirt... Post the level and let the pro's fix it up so you cn see what we are talking about

The term less is more applies to your dirt/sand usage...

k here it is i also did a few more changes

(X-Mann)
you just gave everyone your level........

so?????


im only building levels so i can learn how to make them not so i can collect them and build a sever or something