i was bored and make a level
 

tell me what u think

7/10 cause the tree is cut in half.

Dont just use swamp for detail, and why is there half a tree?

It looks like any other level... Except for the half tree. 5/10

It looks bad having all those chairs side by side like that. You might as well use a bench if you're going to do that. Shouldnt juse use the swamp tiles if you use swamp tiles add a mixture of other things. It looks bad having all swampe then suddenly green grass shadow tile underneath. I recommend trying to redo the support legs for the building looks odd. I'm sure there is other stuff but thats it for now.

Tree = His XAndY Script didnt work!
Level Its Ok Too Plank and house is ok but only for Delteria.

You should/can use swamp for detaling as long as you know how to do it, look at Delteria they did a good job and there's tons of swamp in there levels.

"JUST" Use other things too, sure swamp is ok, but it gets boring

It is just me or does anyone else not like the house?

Shh.. ;) over all its not to bad of an idea he just needs to try some different tiles. The support beams look terrible. But the idea is nice. :)

Its cool. I give it like a 9/10

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The real reason it looks weird (I just noticed) is because the red platform in front of the door is up too far, it covers up the wall... move the platform down 2 tiles (or shorten it down) then put in a wall and fix the door...

Add more things...try Gifs...ligths..scripts (good way)..etc..
and, the level need to be Original (never copy), or u will never learn..(I'm not asking about u did copied) o.O
Keep trying...
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