Rivers and Falls
 

I know this isn't my type of stuff, but i'm seriously trying to get the hang of it.

I'm trying to get a river to flow into a npc waterfall, but it doesn't quite look right. (please don't comment on the ground stuff...i haven't even gotten to that yet...:D )

Gohan

I'm sure you know about the obvious error in the river, so I'll ignore that :x The mouth of the waterfall is FAR too small. Unless you design your own graphics for the waterfall, you should also have deeper (not deepest) water leading into it, otherwise the color scheme simply doesn't match up, to me at least. Also, the river should have a bit more activity (tiling, etc) in it... give it the appearance of a river flow. Just open things up a bit more and throw a bit more creativity into it.

I dont have much practice with that, but look at this and you might get some ideas. Hope it helps.

2nd attempt
 

Hey: not bad (there's a tiny error on the side where you need another tile or 2.

That one's much better. Only thing I can add now is that you may want to put a bit more deep water into the river just to make it look more natural.

Thanks for the help and advice.

(I think i'm beginning to like doing levels AND npcs ;) )

Gohan

Just to help you:

More deep water
Less strait edges in the river

hope it helps =)

How bout now?

Much better still, but you might want to get rid of that one area of deepest water in the river bed. Aside from that, the bottom looks great. Change up the top section a bit, while you're at it, the very beginning of the stream is a bit too straight still.

Yea...sorta have to work on a project in-between edits...and i had to switch over... :P

looks alright, keep working at it.

Pretty good.. your on your way!

Heres 2 examples

opps...silly me

yes

Yes what?

this sure has come a long way from the first version, good work.