Rate My Levels =)
 

Heres the first one.

Heres the second one.

Heres another one of my levels. A spar stadium, Personally I think it should be a dodgeball arena. But I no good at scripting. =D

Heres my own made version of the breadhouse. I dunno why I made it, I guess I was just bored.

Please rate my levels, and tell me if you see any errors. Or anything you think would make them better. Please no crude remarks, this is my first time to show my work to the public.

I like 1 with lava stuff and house in 2... everything else is ok ZI guess...
Level with house seems plain
Spar seems weird... add some grass to green part and don't use those wierd tiles for walls.
Your bread House? What's the point? Looks worse then real one exept for oven part

I dunno, the level with the house in grass dun seem plain to me. Its as detailed as any good level I ever seen. But I understand about the bread house it does look weird. But I like creative things. And I hate the breadhouse on 2k1 its got errors in it. And as for the Spar stadium. I made that long ago, and never used it. But you would acutally have to be standing in it to feel its true potential, and its a lot bigger. Theres other parts of the stadium. Like a underground bar part. A lounge and some other things, its nice.

eww i hate those tiles (top of castle stairs) everybody uses them now and they're so damn ugly :x

Some people like them some people dun, and yes that style of tiles is old, it been used before even graal2k1 cameout. Or atleast I seen it been used on servers long ago. And like I said the stadium is old. I made it long ago when I was still new to level building. I just felt like posting up a shot to see what people thought about it. The Spar stadium and the house on the beach front are my old levels. The firequest one is new though. And the bread house is new. The bread house is something I made about 12:00 a.m and I spent about 30 min on it. It was just a quick project. I,ll make sure I post up some of my new ones one day.

Nice levels, I think I like that bread house better then the graal 2001 house... I kindof forget what the graal 2001 bread house looks like though.

The spar arena looks good, except either get rid of the grass in the middle, or detail it a bunch.

Thanks, I fixed the arenas grass part. Anyone see anything else that would make the levels better. Or does anyone see any errors, in any of the others?

they are not that bad

Thanks, Gangster. It's weird everyone loves my levels. But when I post them up people who may not even be good at level building come and say your levels stinks. I mean I have the chance to work for almost all the servers. But graal2001 and graal classic. Because I have never tried out for them. But I plan on it.

I think that the lave level is pretty good

i like the grass lvl with the house in it..its really well detailed...the water is really good too ;)
good work man

I hate the lava tiles.... the whole set needs to be redone badly.