How do you like this level?
 

HGow do you like THIS level?

I also need to know how to make it better (The Dark Water Part)

6/10.

It's waaaay too plain. You need more detailing, especially in the water. Try to add more deep/deeper blotches (not like the ones on my level) that look good.

Ummm what are the damn things for deep deep water? I can't find them in tile set...

Now what do you think about this?

Hmm well the water still looks rather plain, and the grass could use some tiling work.

Don't look at it far look at it up close... that helps alot...

both of them are way too plain and in the second one, you need to use different tiles to make the house, don't just use the predefined house with that extra bit cos it looks crappy

Beach tile water edge > Cliffs

way too plain

those pillar things going into the water in the first look bad, if you want something like that keep trying cause thats not cutting it. Also, the red flooring doesn't make a good transition to grass tiles, try something else.

The second level is just too plain. Maybe add another house and spice up your house designs a bit.

Both of those levels are just way too plain.

*Agrees* :rolleyes:

Hmm... add some waves in the water, have a varity of grass tiling... make the pathways sand tiles more variated...

For the ground water... add some different tiles there! Try have the swamp close to the water and use some more swamp tiles to not make the swamp so rectangular.

The cliffs looks very... unnatural... make it more variated also ^_^

And maybe fix a bit on the room of the house...

Hope that helps a bit atleast

/Gori

I dont really like it 5/10, to plain, the dock looks weird.

Re: How do you like this level?
 

okay noiw lets think about this mmkay? you show the back part of the structure that goes into the water but the structure on that has no back. this causes it too look quite odd...