My levels
 

I'm gonna make some levels, post them in this thread, and get your advice on them, so I can get to be a better leveler. :)

First Off: Two castle levels I created:

http://img87.imageshack.us/img87/2070/forumslevel1.png

http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/6...rumslevel2.png

(Attachments didn't work, and aren't working on this computer, so I uploaded to imageshack...that's why the post was blank at first, sorry!)

Where?

Here

Oh, intriguing tileset. I think it's a nice starter design, though I suggest fixing the characters up a bit.

I don't like the excessive amount of NPCs, that do nothing but sit there for effect. I think you should cut down the npc amount.

Interesting tileset but I don't like how many curves there are in the wall. It's unrealistic and just looks a bit odd.

I dunno, I like the curviness, what I don't like is the blue and red for the floor tiles. I'd probably change one of the colors to something else.

Personally I say neither would be the color they are for floor tiles, the palette and shades used for it completely clashes with the walls

Ignoring the fact that the castle wall and floor tiles are in no way supposed to blend with eachother and that the perspective is wrong I think it's a decent layout, the floor details are also evenly distributed which is pleasing on the eye.

The one thing I'm not sure about though is whereabouts all the hats for sale will be placed ;).

Ok somebody has to ask this cuz I know I'm not the only one who has thought of this...Was it intentional to make the 2nd level look like an upside down uterus?

Now he mentions it... The first one is vaguely in the shape of a jelly fish.

It kindof reminds me of a crying Goomba actually.

That too. I was thinking "outside the box" :p

I like the curvyness of the walls

Yes, I totally planned on that before I even started making the level.

Thanks 4 admitting at least. :cool: