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MrAnonymous_P2P 11-10-2010 03:52 AM

Getting back into it
 
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Hey guys been sick the past couple of days so I decided to get back into some pixeling just for fun. Started out with this sword just to see how it came out.

Tell me what ya think. Any Comments and Criticism will be appreciated,

Just a quick few notes:
  • Handle and the very end part are not finished/ horribly rushed.
  • Not quite sure which outline to go with or which would look best.
  • Not pillow shaded on the blade, its supposed to be a type of crystal.

Fulg0reSama 11-10-2010 03:55 AM

For a crystal blade it seems very leaf like (cartoony leaf).

Supaman771 11-10-2010 04:39 AM

My first impression was a leaf blade as well.

Might wanna make it less leafy...

:p

MrAnonymous_P2P 11-10-2010 05:40 AM

I think I will just leave it leafy and say that is what I had in mind all along :)

maximus_asinus 11-10-2010 05:53 AM

I thought it was a busted watermelon.

Crow 11-10-2010 06:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MrAnonymous_P2P (Post 1611261)
Not pillow shaded on the blade, its supposed to be a type of crystal.

It is pillow shaded.

Dnegel 11-10-2010 10:34 PM

Try adding some "glow" on it.

Fulg0reSama 11-10-2010 10:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Dnegel (Post 1611330)
Try adding some "glow" on it.

No, Glow is what got it leafy in the first place. It looks like it should be basking in the sunlight waiting for an elf to pick it up (sound familar?)

What he needs is to give it a more metallic texture to the blade, I could make an outline of that and if given the right texture then the proper shine (glow would be a horrible move) then you'd have a more crystal looking blade, Look at graal's gralat's for example. Just throwing random thoughts, hope someone with actual experience can pick the nuggets of useful info out of this ball of ****.

smirt362 11-11-2010 12:57 AM

I'd do it more like this.
http://img263.imageshack.us/img263/8055/crystaln.png

Crystals have sharp, angular edges.

Also, I like your color choices.

Draenin 11-11-2010 06:51 AM

The curvature of it is mostly the problem.

Dnegel 11-11-2010 06:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Fulg0reSama (Post 1611333)
No, Glow is what got it leafy in the first place. It looks like it should be basking in the sunlight waiting for an elf to pick it up (sound familar?)

What he needs is to give it a more metallic texture to the blade, I could make an outline of that and if given the right texture then the proper shine (glow would be a horrible move) then you'd have a more crystal looking blade, Look at graal's gralat's for example. Just throwing random thoughts, hope someone with actual experience can pick the nuggets of useful info out of this ball of ****.

I wrote wrong.. x_x

I mean't "shiny", like steel f.eks.

MrAnonymous_P2P 11-11-2010 06:22 PM

I'm having trouble nailing the texture I want so it might be a few days before I get some results.

Thanks for the comments and help so far guys.


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