Soldier sent from Heaven
 

Oranos gave you a Platemail of the Gods to take on those creatures living out there in the dark. Be strong soldier!

Feel free to comment!

In my opinion, it turned out too flashy, but I think I did a very good attempt on the head its-self.

[Edit]
Things I'll work on when I got time:
Face to be fixed (forgot a spot of hair on the right)
Abs armor details to be worked on

I like the hair alittle. ^^

But the outline of the armor should be darker than the armor itself.

Looks like it would be out-of-place in an actual game, looks too soft if that makes sense.

I don't like the white outline, and i think it needs more contrast, atleast in the face and hair.

I think you need to work around a light source when you shade, especially on the armour. At the moment, it looks like some weird inverted pillow shading. The outling isn't bad but you definitely need to work on the shading.

In my opinion, it looks too Atrius like

how insulting :I

well is it not true?

Rawr

Need to work on contrast a bit more, still.

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I can't believe nobody has pointed out that this is stolen from Final Fantasy Seven.
It's the main character. Cloyd.

If that's a typo, ok, i don't think he looks like Cloud tho. But i can see what you mean.

2nd version looks great.

Probably need a little more work on the eyes ? Maybe some white space ?
Full blue eyes looks weird

Stolen? I never played final fantasy lol. :P

More definition, looks like blue and yellow for me.

By definition, you mean contrast or better outlines?

better definition of the shape, by any means possible i guess.

In general. Definition is mostly achieved with light and shadow.

With this one, I can see very slight definition. Maybe you should increase the intensity of the highlights a bit and we could see what happens from there. However, I gived you props because it does seem to becoming together and looks nicer than your first piece.