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xXziroXx 09-28-2008 01:37 AM

Yuuhi Kurenai
 
So, I felt in the mood of pixeling something, and the first thing that came to my mind was Yuuhi Kurenai from Naruto. I don't personally think it came out too great, but... what you do guys think?


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...al/kurenai.png


EDIT: New version:

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6.../kurenai-1.png




Here's how she look in the anime:

http://i61.photobucket.com/albums/h5.../kurenai00.jpg

WarLord2004 09-28-2008 02:43 AM

Look nice i like naruto but am not so much into it so am not sure who the character is but for the concept of the pixel it does look like something from naruto .. So it works out well. Great job

kia345 09-28-2008 02:48 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by xXziroXx (Post 1426926)
So, I felt in the mood of pixeling something, and the first thing that came to my mind was Yuuhi Kurenai from Naruto. I don't personally think it came out too great, but... what you do guys think?

Aren't anime women curvier than that?

xXziroXx 09-28-2008 02:51 AM

I edited my first post to show what she looks like in the anime, for those who don't know.

MagikMasterMind 09-28-2008 04:07 AM

Nice choice. I think she's hella hot.
But for the GFX, I have a few suggestions to bring up.
Note that these are to help the GFX. So don't get mad at it.

1. Make her a little skinnier, she looks fat a bit.

2. Redo her *Upper-top*'s shade a little more evidentm and add curves to it, so we don't think she's flat.

3. Try to fix the hair, something seems wrong with it.

4. Try to add more shading details on the whole GFX. Focus a little more on the body if you can.

5. Fix the eyes.. They are too apart.

6. Has already said, add curls. It's a girl.

DarkRenji 09-28-2008 04:07 AM

Its not bad ;) She looks a little fat though, the way you pixel her :O

Tigairius 09-28-2008 04:10 AM

Her eyes are too far apart, looks like a hammerhead.

anubis_wing 09-28-2008 04:31 AM

I made a slight few changes.
http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/9770/kurenailw2.png

WarLord2004 09-28-2008 04:36 AM

Nice Anubis look more like a femme now ...

But look at the pic he posted if she remove the lipstick and change the eye expression i swear it's a man lolz..

DrakilorP2P 09-28-2008 11:41 AM

Looks like a paper wrapped mummy with downs syndrome. Increase the "spacing" of the garment or adjust the colours.

Elk 09-28-2008 11:50 AM

Anyways, color spectrum is so...unsaturated :p maybe add more red accents and
change the skin palette? According to the feet the entire piece seems to be a common
4/5 perspective so the head needs the same perspective, make it more plastic!
Shortenings are a *****...so theres always the problem with feet and knees in a front
position...but leave it as it is! Would be too much work to clear this out and find a
solution ;p but as for the body, Kurenai itself is pretty streched and tall it seems, so
making her a tad thinner and her legs/torso a bit longer would be nice

Liberated 09-28-2008 12:46 PM

did you mean to blacken the spoiler out? Because if so it's not working,
Luckily i already knew that.

xXziroXx 09-28-2008 08:18 PM

I edited it based on some comments here, and some advise from Dusty. Thoughts? :)

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6.../kurenai-1.png

xAzerothx 09-28-2008 08:22 PM

Her boobs are bigger then her head, perfect.

xXziroXx 09-28-2008 08:24 PM

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Originally Posted by xAzerothx (Post 1427104)
Her boobs are bigger then her head, perfect.

I suggest you get your eyes checked up, then take another look. :whatever:

kia345 09-28-2008 08:25 PM

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Originally Posted by xXziroXx (Post 1427106)
I suggest you get your eyes checked up, then take another look. :whatever:

But he's right

xAzerothx 09-28-2008 08:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by xXziroXx (Post 1427106)
I suggest you get your eyes checked up, then take another look. :whatever:

I don't understand? What do you mean?

anubis_wing 09-28-2008 09:31 PM

Ziro, take my version and change it a bit. Yours still looks like a man.

Nataxo 09-28-2008 10:02 PM

not bad ;) though i cant see the face vry clearly...

xXziroXx 09-29-2008 07:51 PM

Better now...? :(


http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6.../kurenai-2.png

Arch_Angel 09-29-2008 07:52 PM

That looks so much better Ziro!
Doesn't looked like a deformed shim anymore :(
Her left leg still looks kind of chubby. Guess it depends on how you like your women.

xXziroXx 09-29-2008 07:58 PM

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Originally Posted by Arch_Angel (Post 1427360)
Her left leg still looks kind of chubby. Guess it depends on how you like your women.

Ow wtf !pissed!

Fixed.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6.../kurenai-3.png

Arch_Angel 09-29-2008 07:59 PM

Haha there you go.. Could maybe use a little more 'curves' in the leg. I'm horrible with bodies and such, but making it have more of a form to it might look better. Even if you dont fix that, still looks just fine as it is.

WarLord2004 09-29-2008 09:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by xXziroXx (Post 1427363)

The pose is still akward but very nice..

When doing a pixel as in a charcter or what not you may need to make it slightly bigger so you can tell the gender...

Your shading is very good am guessing dusty helped with this :)

xXziroXx 09-29-2008 10:54 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by WarLord2004 (Post 1427370)
Your shading is very good am guessing dusty helped with this :)

He showed me how to improve the torso area since I had it cluttered with black lines, but other then that I shaded it myself using Dusty's pointers :D

anubis_wing 09-30-2008 02:36 AM

Face and she still has a pretty masculin upper body.

xXziroXx 09-30-2008 02:49 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by anubis_wing (Post 1427491)
she still has a pretty masculin upper body.

No she doesn't wtf. :confused:

WarLord2004 09-30-2008 03:54 AM

This is why women should only wear underwear and bra so people can tell the difference cause honestly in the real world some woman do look a hell lot like men ... Well it's not something nice to say but it's noticeable...

same goes for pixel she needs a little blush on face a different set of eyes the shading on face is not really needed....... reason why she still looks like a man...

xAzerothx 09-30-2008 05:14 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by xXziroXx (Post 1427359)

Like the pose. Hate the rack.

anubis_wing 09-30-2008 11:56 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by xXziroXx (Post 1427502)
No she doesn't wtf. :confused:

Move her shoulders in a pixel or two.

Vima 09-30-2008 03:05 PM

thats some sexy girl ;)

Codein 09-30-2008 04:31 PM

Her breaks look square =o

anubis_wing 10-01-2008 04:14 AM

I made some changes.
http://img407.imageshack.us/img407/8395/kurenaigu2.png

xXziroXx 10-01-2008 03:01 PM

Okay, some things Anubis.

* You molested her face.
* You crippled her shoulders - ever realized that the clothing is supposed to be bigger then her actual arms/shoulders? I suggest you google what she's supposed to look like before you make changes without any research.
* What the bloody hell did you do to her legs? Way to kill the stance she had.

Admittedly I need to fix her right foot, but apart from that, GTFO from my thread with changes that doesn't take her original self into consideration.

Oh and by the way, I used this image for her legs and right arm pose:

http://i136.photobucket.com/albums/q...45/Kurenai.jpg

WarLord2004 10-01-2008 06:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by xXziroXx (Post 1427949)
Okay, some things Anubis.

* You molested her face.
* You crippled her shoulders - ever realized that the clothing is supposed to be bigger then her actual arms/shoulders? I suggest you google what she's supposed to look like before you make changes without any research.
* What the bloody hell did you do to her legs? Way to kill the stance she had.

Admittedly I need to fix her right foot, but apart from that, GTFO from my thread with changes that doesn't take her original self into consideration.

Oh and by the way, I used this image for her legs and right arm pose:

Boo hooo? Erm anibus is only trying to help and bring out the female side of your pixel.. Beside the pose what u done on the leg is pretty awfull b/c the feet seem a tad bigger than the other....

Making small pixel is hard am guessing you doing it for a avatar or something otherwise just re-size her a bit and do it all over again...Then no one would complain about or even try to help :cry:

xXziroXx 10-01-2008 06:32 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by WarLord2004 (Post 1427981)
Beside the pose what u done on the leg is pretty awfull b/c the feet seem a tad bigger than the other....

If you had read my post you would've seen me saying that I should fix that leg. And if Anubis wanted to help, he should strive to make his edits closer to how she's supposed to look, not how he wants her to look.

Quote:

Originally Posted by WarLord2004 (Post 1427981)
Making small pixel is hard am guessing you doing it for a avatar or something otherwise just re-size her a bit and do it all over again...Then no one would complain about or even try to help :cry:

Don't jump to conclusions, no, I'm not making it for an avatar.

Angelu 10-01-2008 11:00 PM

looks like michael jackson in a dress :O
not so cool right now

Elizabeth 10-01-2008 11:53 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by xXziroXx (Post 1427363)

lots of detail, its nice, but the left leg in insanely chubby from the thigh down to the actual foot. her face looks like it has cheek bones, anorexia if you will. neck looks strained. id say the only thing you should change is the leg proportions.

Angelu 10-02-2008 01:28 AM

http://home.graffiti.net/chrischi4u/kurenaipixelbla.png

XD

anubis_wing 10-02-2008 03:15 AM

Lol owned


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