so,
this is the gun :)

I think you should add more detail to the beam << i look at the way you seen it shooting and it seems a little off to me.But hell, What do i know.

whats wrong with it? :confused:

I don't know xD. I just odnt like the shadeing >> Its to simple and its kinda huge <<.

I could say sumthing about the beam and I could get banned :) but I won't :O it's too uhh idrk

Also make the handle less Square?:)

cuz ur a noob

The gun itself has decent shading but am I the only one who thinks the outline is just...bad? I mean it looks like a giant water pistol gone wrong in the future.

It doesn't have the light effect yet, it'll look hot when/if it got scripted in.

As i said, The handle a bit Rounder and Maybe a bit less detail, By that i mean small dots.:)

Box Handle!

Hm :rolleyes:

so,
the handle needs to be rounder?
ok.

How is this?

It looks sloppy. Kind of looks like you took a smaller image, and just enlarged it. x_x

i didnt took a smaller immage,
i made the wep more rounder,
but what do i need to change about it?
i dont see any wrong things about it,
and what do you mean with sloppy x_x
i dont need comments, i need advises.

can sum1 give me advise what i need to change on my wep.

i am already working a long time on this wep, this was my 2nd wep and i have more then 40 maps of it in my computer.
so... when is it finaly done..

Ok, first, stop with the mega triple quadruple posting etc...

The gun has potential but I think, personally, it's too blocky...you need to add depth to parts of it and such.

ok,
its hard to add depth in a gun with mutch gfx :(

if you can make it less blocky looking,
then plz do it

can sum1 tell me what the best program is for making weps,
i use paint at the moment, is there a better program?

alt+f4

You can try PSP ( Paint Shop Pro )

Stop double posting x_x. Do you know what that means? someone already told you once.

I swear i've seen a super soaker like that before...

Paint.NET

how is this?
there is more depth

mte, i really think you should give up on this weapon, start a new one. :S

if sum1 can help me with depth then it would be done in a few houres.
i did so much work for it, i am not giving up now...

does the weapon have too light collors or somethin?
does it needs to be more darker collors?
how is the right immage then?
is it too dark?

Give up, x_x Its been like MONTHS.

This isnt so its gonna be added on zone, Its to help you make better weps. Learn from it, and start a new better more unique idea.

but why doesnt any1 answer my questions to help me...
answer my questions plz...

It failed from the start... Way too lego-like, so chunky, quite ugly to be honest. Although the detail is good, the actual outline looks like a 3 yr olds drawing of his favourite oversized power ranger toy gun.

Edit: I'm being too harsh. A 3 1/2 yr old's drawing.

People have, This wep is a phailure start a fresh new one.Learn from the mistakes you made on this one.

[rant]
Ok, just scrap this idea.

Zone is set in a futuristic world. Now, look at guns today, do you see HUGE guns that look like a chisel has been taken to a block of wood?
No.

The fact is, imagine a laser gun, it's not going to be a big block with a some kind of bright red marker beacon on the front.

It's going to be small, subtle and look futuristic. You don't see mobile phones getting bigger do you? They all seem to be getting smaller, in the future, The mobile phone may not even have to be held, just placed in the ear etc

So scarp this block-work, and make a smooth, subtle and eye pleasing metallic laser gun.

[/rant]

Please excuse, I should have said this 10 pages back.>_<

this threads been waiting for that rant

I know, it's just you get blabbering idiots who would be like "OMFG WHY NOT HELP HIM RATHER THAN GIVING HIM ****!?"

I think maybe that's one of the things, I mean fair play, he's new and trying but, he needs to leave this and move on. :D

its a rlly great wep but only the bullet and the weapon needs to be an size littler

revived...?

The weapons for zone need to be Realistic. This looks like a toy.
Dennis, Try to make other weapon, Good luck ;)

A few things:

1. You're repeating what everyone else has been saying this whole thread.
2. I'm interested to see what your idea of a "realistic" gun for zone would be. Could you perhaps design one or show us one of your previous works so we can see what you mean?

Make a special weapon, AK 47 that pops out from under a hat, so you can blow people away with a rata tat tat, just an idea.