I REALLY hated the back of the gun (handle thingy) so I remade it on free time and what do you thnik of it?

Those vibrator bullets need to be changed into some kind of plasma slug

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that is the funniest thing i ever heard on a gfx forum....hahah

Well I don't want a plasma gun but an energy gun. Anyways how good is itnow?

Added the purple thingy in the up/down views and made new bulelts. They arent "vibrators" anymore, there is the un-charged ones and the hook shaped ones are charged (D).

lol he's looking for a reply lol just to let u kno ur gun will not be added so u mite as well stop trying unless u just wanan show wat u can do in ur spare time...

I don't want my gun to be added in zone if it's gonna be buyable for gralats or if it will only be rentable for 1 month. Anyways It is sure that anyone would like that his gun gets added to zone but I'm not saying and begging so it comes to sale... Well on the other hand I just want tips to upgrade my "gun making". Just though about this too

Name : Pulse Breaker
Ammo : Energy/Plasma
Speed : same as Kv24
Damage : 15 for "s" and 37 for "d"
Clip : 23 on normal shots and uses 30 for charged shots
Sold for : 8k-11k
Requires : Gold and Marshall rank to use

Could you add more detail + make it larger ?

What do you mean by details and by larger like how much more pixels?

Details as in more thorough shading and more complex details such as the parts that should "stick out" as compared to other parts. Larger more so for the purpose of being able to see it better and then shrinking it down somewhat. Oh and improve on the bullets as you see fit because that projectile is currently odd when compared to other zone items that are fired. If you could change the shape slightly to make it look less awkward that would be nice also.

I like it. Just make it a little bigger and fix the shading in some areas. It looks a bit pillow shaded.

Also, please, please read the rules. Name your thread's title appropriately and not just "My First GFX". I'll let you off this time because you are new, but don't do it in the future. I've changed it for you so don't worry about it this time.

Not to be mean, but how would you fire it? I don't see a handle, so I was wondering...

Also, I agree with the others, make it a bit larger, and try to "upgrade" its shading.

You put both of your arms around it and pray to whatever God you pray to for it to shoot.

Sorry for bump but I've been working on it recently and I'd like some more feedback, it's been quite some time since I updated it, but I tried to make it bigger (Pretty hard when I compare on old ones due to the unability of seeing it closer). I just want to improve and make the best I can for later on. I also changed alot the charge because it didn't look much stronger than the weak bullets. Tried to shade a little more, it might look brighter/lighter than it should be due to my common problems I keep facing.

I just wanted to say WOW! You have gone a long way. I'm not too sure about the bullets though.

It looks like a Shark. But Hes good.

I tried to reshade the gun and edited the line art a bit, any way what you want to do with shading is creat one mid shade of grey then slowly add different shades corresponding to where the light would fall. Here is a good tutorial by sayian on shading http://forums.graalonline.com/forums...ad.php?t=70537

Thanks, I think the guide will help me alot. You did a better work than me in my opinion, but I don't want my gun to look like that. But you're really good o.O