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I like you level alot, but i think both tables look messed at the top, you shouldn't make chairs go into tables like that. =P Also, where that ladder goes up the cliff, at the top, make an indent so that it doesn't look like you're jumping over a little "hill" at the top.

Everything looks pretty decent, what people fail to remember is the fact that out current tiles are VERY limiting in what you can and cannot do. I agree that the tables are screwed, they never look good with the chairs overlapping. Also, remember to put some curves in that river at the top.

So far so good. Give him a break people.

not bad not good

It dont look like its on water, add to it, But at least your trying, and not letting people call it there own level since it would be edited

Not bad.. it might look nicer if the dock was using wood tiles instead of the stair tiles.. maybe try the wood tiles I used in the apple pie bakery? or maybe make some horizontal or vertical wood versions.. I have some sitting on my hard drive somewhere...

I made some wood tiles a while ago...they are really simple though. =\

I'd use the horizontal and vertical ones if I had them, and I knew how to use addtiledef.

addtiledef takes no time to learn (im me sometime if you have any questions). as well, i'll teach you a few things etc. to make your levels nicer. Faheria has an awesome variety for wood tiles since many things are made out of wood (bookshelf etc.)

Uh...
well...
I added the tiles koni gave me, and here's how it looks...

Top off the level is great.. the beach at the bottom is to plain use alot more grass tiles up there like on the top
cuase ithink the top is great

hey, looks way better, just dix up the whole bottom of the level, and ad water detail!