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pooper200000
09-07-2006, 04:25 AM
I don't know if this could be a new speeder or what Im kinda busy but thought i would post it and see what people thought of it. I know it will have to be bigger and the red should be fire effects like from the jp. Please post positive critism!

SayianOozaru
09-07-2006, 06:41 AM
your going to get all kinds of critism when you post here...but since you only want positive, i wont say anything...just keep practicing...

MisterMastermind
09-07-2006, 02:51 PM
I don't know if this could be a new speeder or what Im kinda busy but thought i would post it and see what people thought of it. I know it will have to be bigger and the red should be fire effects like from the jp. Please post positive critism!
... No. It lacks detail, and color variation. I also dislike the shape. Don't expect all positive comments if you post here. Ask sayian for some lessons. :)

Huwajux
09-07-2006, 08:25 PM
Um...ok, if you're serious then take note of this.
No shading, lack of colours, it's tiny, it has only 1 sprite position and the position it has has no angle at all.

Crono
09-07-2006, 08:49 PM
What is that?

Looks like a 2D space ship you find in old games.

Graphic wise it needs shading, better outline. It's just a yellow thing.

pooper200000
09-08-2006, 12:45 AM
OK to many post to cnt c and v so heres my huger response. 1. I just wanted to know if you like the idea. Ill finish it tonight if Im not to busy but im doing p.s.e.o. so im a little rushed. I know i didn't post side views and teh point would be like a glider/speeder maybe bought not sure yet. The front would be where your head is back legs etc. Arms would be on side. Ill work on it actually do any shading and yees I know there isn't all positive critiscm but the positive kind helps without letting me know im a the worst gfxer EVER! ^^ I won't ask sayain for lesons i just like screwin around that all

MisterMastermind
09-08-2006, 12:52 AM
I love the idea.

pooper200000
09-08-2006, 12:53 AM
for the person on top of speeder? Im gonna owrk on it im just spamming the forums for a bit first. And the idea for it buyable you likey?

MisterMastermind
09-08-2006, 12:55 AM
for the person on top of speeder? Im gonna owrk on it im just spamming the forums for a bit first. And the idea for it buyable you likey?
I think it'd be a cool position for a glider, kind of like the speeders.

pooper200000
09-08-2006, 12:56 AM
I think it'd be a cool position for a glider, kind of like the speeders.
answer the pother part! Buyable or no? THen it ould have speed of speeder and only transport no guns. I kinda want it to look like a star wars thinger mabotater!

heres teh new one tell me what you like the h stands for my hands i didn't put an f and the sn is where my head would start in that general area the fire is for the flame effects form jp

Leoxx
09-08-2006, 04:44 AM
1. is it gona be on all the planets? 2. Its gona hurt my eyes to look at that on iraica from the highlighted yellow :(
i like the idea, but then u got to think of how much to sell for, how its used, how fast it goes, how much dmg it take wen hit, and how much hp it has.
I think it would be better with a gray and the outer rim would look good as it is with the light gray color. and i guess the shape is good too, but it could look better a little bit smaller, not looking like it can hold two ppl. really good idea though

pooper200000
09-09-2006, 12:36 AM
1. is it gona be on all the planets? 2. Its gona hurt my eyes to look at that on iraica from the highlighted yellow :(
i like the idea, but then u got to think of how much to sell for, how its used, how fast it goes, how much dmg it take wen hit, and how much hp it has.
I think it would be better with a gray and the outer rim would look good as it is with the light gray color. and i guess the shape is good too, but it could look better a little bit smaller, not looking like it can hold two ppl. really good idea though
HP none it flys in air mechs freeze it it sits there it has no weapons. It goes as fast as speeder it would sell for 18k-20k still not sure. I am working on the colors as i post. It wouldn't hold 2 people they would be on top of it. I am going ot add different shades of yellow im just really busy with p.s.e.o so not much time :(. Ill post new one in awhile

pooper200000
09-13-2006, 12:24 AM
Sorry for teh bouble post but just thought I would say maybe some other people should try ot gf something like this since I definitely can't.

dude2020
09-13-2006, 01:24 AM
Sorry for teh bouble post but just thought I would say maybe some other people should try ot gf something like this since I definitely can't.EDIT BOTTON!!!!!

dude2020
09-13-2006, 01:25 AM
answer the pother part! Buyable or no? THen it ould have speed of speeder and only transport no guns. I kinda want it to look like a star wars thinger mabotater!

heres teh new one tell me what you like the h stands for my hands i didn't put an f and the sn is where my head would start in that general area the fire is for the flame effects form jpu jsut made a Star wars ship cept its how shalli but this uglyer?

pooper200000
09-13-2006, 01:44 AM
EDIT BOTTON!!!!!
Edit button was gone it disapears after a very short time. Oh and you double posted anyways! :D Anyone here want to take a try and Ive only seen the first star wars movie so if its like taht then sure I guess.

Draenin
09-13-2006, 01:51 AM
Reminds me of the Epoch, if you were to turn it the other way around. However, the porportions are off on the tops of the left and right views. Those lines should be shallower, as you're viewing it from the side. I like the shape though.

pooper200000
09-13-2006, 01:52 AM
Reminds me of the Epoch, if you were to turn it the other way around. However, the porportions are off on the tops of the left and right views. Those lines should be shallower, as you're viewing it from the side. I like the shape though.
Epoch? Please if you know what it should look like it i can't gfx worth my acc name.

lancelot9
09-13-2006, 06:06 AM
looks like the thing from StarWars episode 1..

Draenin
09-13-2006, 12:00 PM
I will not work on this like you asked me to unless you fix the porportions on the top of the left and right views. All you did was flip the image, and that doesn't work out well when it actually gets detailed.

pooper200000
09-17-2006, 02:47 AM
I will not work on this like you asked me to unless you fix the porportions on the top of the left and right views. All you did was flip the image, and that doesn't work out well when it actually gets detailed.
Oops! Sorry draenin I never looked back at this and yes I flipped the image. How should I "fix" the proportions on the top part? Ill post what I did to try and fix it and played with the colors a bit. Ok i just tried to attach it and it said this:
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If one of the mods will give me permissino ill post a link ot imageshack.

Admins
09-17-2006, 06:27 AM
We are currently modifying some parts of the forums, sorry when there are problems with attachments right now.

pooper200000
09-17-2006, 09:55 PM
We are currently modifying some parts of the forums, sorry when there are problems with attachments right now.
NP im going to post link to imageshack ina while darlene the great moon goddess gave me permission. Heres the link draenin is that what you wanted or ?
<a href="http://img124.imageshack.us/my.php?image=newvehgo7.png" target="_blank"><img src="http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/4415/newvehgo7.th.png" border="0" alt="Free Image Hosting at www.ImageShack.us" /></a>

Huwajux
09-18-2006, 10:42 PM
<a href="http://img124.imageshack.us/my.php?image=newvehgo7.png" target="_blank"><img src="http://img124.imageshack.us/img124/4415/newvehgo7.th.png" border="0" alt="Free Image Hosting at www.ImageShack.us" /></a>
Good Lord, what is that?

pooper200000
09-19-2006, 01:00 AM
Good Lord, what is that?
You know I can't gfx worth my aco**** name tahts why im asking dreanin for help :D

MisterMastermind
09-20-2006, 01:19 AM
Taboo fighter from starwars :)

pooper200000
09-20-2006, 01:52 AM
Taboo fighter from starwars :)

What the heck is a taboo fighet?!?!?!?!

Sulukra
09-20-2006, 02:17 AM
Taboo fighter from starwars :)

Taboo fighter?...No comment.

Naboo Fighter.

pooper200000
09-20-2006, 02:22 AM
Taboo fighter?...No comment.

Naboo Fighter.

What is that?!?!?!?!

MisterMastermind
09-21-2006, 12:02 AM
Taboo fighter?...No comment.

Naboo Fighter.

You caught my spelling mistake.:cry:

pooper200000
09-21-2006, 12:49 AM
You caught my spelling mistake.:cry:

:pluffy: WHAT IS IT??!?!?!?

dude2020
09-21-2006, 12:57 AM
:pluffy: WHAT IS IT??!?!?!?Watch Star Wars episode 1 :noob: if it still sells lol if they dont look on eBay

Googi
09-21-2006, 01:21 AM
Yeah, I have a criticism. You're posting bitmaps.

pooper200000
09-21-2006, 03:44 AM
Yeah, I have a criticism. You're posting bitmaps.

Bitmaps? I post images

Googi
09-21-2006, 04:02 AM
Bitmaps? I post images

Calling bitmaps images is like calling Zone a shooter game.

Stone_Tower
09-21-2006, 04:06 AM
Good idea, but the space-craft is too small and too flat, keep up at it though. ;)

pooper200000
09-21-2006, 02:29 PM
Calling bitmaps images is like calling Zone a shooter game.

It is basically its really a pking game and thats the only type of document I can attach.

Draenin
09-21-2006, 03:24 PM
Oops! Sorry draenin I never looked back at this and yes I flipped the image. How should I "fix" the proportions on the top part? Ill post what I did to try and fix it and played with the colors a bit.I want you to fix this part. Right now, it looks like it's being viewed from the top, rather than the sides. The bottom side should go down farther than the top side.

SayianOozaru
09-21-2006, 05:12 PM
Draenin, just redo the entire image. The thing looks smaller than the player, so not resizing it will just make it a waste of time. So...resize it, and finish it
:noob:

Draenin
09-21-2006, 05:17 PM
He wanted to me finish his template, so his template needs to be correct. I shouldn't have to complete his lazy outlining.

pooper200000
09-21-2006, 11:48 PM
Draenin i will have it finished by sunday ive got relatives out and a the very back or middle?

Zero Hour
09-21-2006, 11:58 PM
The design is very ugly, and rough.

pooper200000
09-22-2006, 12:01 AM
The design is very ugly, and rough.

I've never been a good gfxer. I probaly never will be able to make teh simplest of graphics. Look at my zone appearance and tell me if you think I could gfx due to the clasinh of colors. That should be scary enough, Im going to work on the speder this weekend though I just have a couple essays to right first.