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Jinx
07-04-2002, 01:43 AM
Review : Farelands

The server has been re-submitted to me for another review.

Onlinestartlocal is still the same. You can choose from a plethera of different classes. There is still no description for the classes, and there are still no descriptions for the kingdom selections, although the level seems to be fixed up a bit.

The levels for the starting town are nice, at least the outside ones are. There are very few inside levels.

The rest of the overworld is blank.

The owner of this PW wants players to make the playerworld once it gets up, he wants them to submit buildings and stuff. I'm fine with that, but you still have to do more work on the overworld. You can leave lots of room for stuff like that, but PLEASE at least tile them up, put some grass and flower tiles here and there, so the levels at least look appealing. Put some trees here and there, etc. I wouldn't rely completley on players trying to make great levels. Try making a few towns by yourself, not leaving it up to the players.

You'll need some quests, you don't have any.

Creativity - 5

Levels - 2
Very few levles were done, but I liked the ones that were done, I think they were done pretty well. The server would be a lot better if you could use that level skill a lot more.

NPCs - 1
I could only find one NPC, a tailor NPC.

Quests - 0
No quests. Plain and simple.

Storyline - 5
At the beggining you pick Class and Kingdom, I assume that would tie in with a storyline somewhere......

Overall Score - 13 out of 50

Farelands Status = Fail

-Jinx

Graal518
07-04-2002, 01:44 AM
Ouchies.
-Wind

Python523
07-04-2002, 02:00 AM
ouch, glad I'm not the guy who made that

Zolrieg
07-04-2002, 02:17 AM
How embarassing. :(

zell12
07-04-2002, 02:24 AM
Poky said it passed XD haha

Graal518
07-04-2002, 02:36 AM
Originally posted by zell12
Poky said it passed XD haha
What, does he for for it? O_o;

Legondary_MyTH
07-04-2002, 02:45 AM
he is the owner XD

zell12
07-04-2002, 02:47 AM
Poky, if you read this tell me why you still say Jinx passed it x.x

fedorov6116
07-04-2002, 02:51 AM
Jinz said he didnt look at all the levels so far and he is going to chage the score of the pw so he might or might not pass it its up to him he saw diffrent levels because some of the older levels got mixed up witht he new ones also he didnt start on the right online start local graal so that was the problem right there so just wait and see there is alot of other levels that we got done from last time and when i say alot i mean alot and Ex you should change your signature image you aint the owner of Mithica any more

zell12
07-04-2002, 02:56 AM
It doesn't say I am the owner, nor the correct title, Manager *cough cough*

fedorov6116
07-04-2002, 02:58 AM
Oppsies sorry Exie :)

fedorov6116
07-04-2002, 03:09 AM
Jinx go on aim

Jinx
07-04-2002, 03:10 AM
Originally posted by fedorov6116
Jinz said he didnt look at all the levels so far and he is going to chage the score of the pw so he might or might not pass it its up to him he saw diffrent levels because some of the older levels got mixed up witht he new ones also he didnt start on the right online start local graal so that was the problem right there so just wait and see there is alot of other levels that we got done from last time and when i say alot i mean alot and Ex you should change your signature image you aint the owner of Mithica any more

It brings the score for levels up a little, but not nearly enough to pass.

-Jinx

zell12
07-04-2002, 03:29 AM
*Wispers to Poky* Pay Him Cash Monies XD

Waltz5
07-04-2002, 04:17 AM
Wow, that's low X.x...

Aestus
07-04-2002, 05:09 AM
I don't like having the "storline" aspect included in the review. 2k1 has no real storyline, nor do most other playerworlds. A story might be an interesting feature of a playerworld, but it shouldn't be required.

Brad
07-04-2002, 05:19 AM
hahaha i'd cry if that was me

Jinx
07-04-2002, 05:21 AM
Originally posted by Aestus
I don't like having the "storline" aspect included in the review. 2k1 has no real storyline, nor do most other playerworlds. A story might be an interesting feature of a playerworld, but it shouldn't be required.

I dont' require it. If they don't have one, I'll give it a 7.5(about a 7.5 average is required in each catergory to pass).

If they do have a storyline, I'll look at it, see how good it is, and watch how consistant they are with it.

-Jinx

Torankusu
07-04-2002, 05:53 AM
Originally posted by Jinx


I dont' require it. If they don't have one, I'll give it a 7.5(about a 7.5 average is required in each catergory to pass).

If they do have a storyline, I'll look at it, see how good it is, and watch how consistant they are with it.

-Jinx ;)

Dustey4Ever
07-04-2002, 05:53 AM
Originally posted by Waltz5
Wow, that's low X.x...

plain and simple:megaeek:

XxxxneosoftxxxX
07-04-2002, 08:45 AM
Originally posted by fedorov6116
Jinz said he didnt look at all the levels so far and he is going to chage the score of the pw so he might or might not pass it its up to him he saw diffrent levels because some of the older levels got mixed up witht he new ones also he didnt start on the right online start local graal so that was the problem right there so just wait and see there is alot of other levels that we got done from last time and when i say alot i mean alot and Ex you should change your signature image you aint the owner of Mithica any more

lol how can you start on the wrong online start local....

Originally posted by Aestus
I don't like having the "storline" aspect included in the review. 2k1 has no real storyline, nor do most other playerworlds. A story might be an interesting feature of a playerworld, but it shouldn't be required.


umm Shaded Legend.

DarkHero2002
07-04-2002, 09:16 AM
damn after i saw 13 i was like oshit

Dark-Dragoon
07-04-2002, 09:45 AM
damn after i saw 13 i was like oshit
Ummm.....Uh......
*tries very hard to make sense of that statement*
Sorry, tried my hardest..*Head explodes*

Link77
07-04-2002, 10:40 AM
wel im stll thinking if destriga is ready to send in....

i know its better thn this tho. :p

Cid_Night
07-04-2002, 10:42 AM
it should be alot better then this one if you want it to pass...obviously

Jinx
07-05-2002, 09:07 AM
Originally posted by Link77
wel im stll thinking if destriga is ready to send in....

i know its better thn this tho. :p

Take your time, submit when you're sure you are ready. There are very few PWs that do that now, the ones that do generally are better.

-Jinx

brock128
07-05-2002, 09:09 AM
Originally posted by Jinx


Take your time, submit when you're sure you are ready. There are very few PWs that do that now, the ones that do generally are better.

-Jinx
See: Oasis, Graal2230, etc

zrpgp2p
07-06-2002, 05:34 AM
Only one NPC???:eek: Ouch..