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lordhelmut
02-24-2002, 02:45 AM
What ya guys think about the start of my first ever! MOUNTAIN!

lordhelmut
02-24-2002, 02:46 AM
woops my bad

Androk2k1
02-24-2002, 03:01 AM
Nice... I never see any tile errors so tht's not to me but looks nice though there are too many grass tiles, sotry putting bushes/stones/swamp, chooseing to just make alot og flowers etc is bad idea

zell12
02-24-2002, 03:43 AM
- Really nice, alot of Grass, try scattering it out some more...
- The water fall on the end, goes on the grass :confused:
- I found a tile error ;)
- Finally, the moutian thing beside the cave door, is kind straight :(

BARGAD
02-24-2002, 05:21 AM
Originally posted by lordhelmut
woops my bad

Ok... I think you have improved your level style quite a bit since I last saw one of your levels. That was before Babylon was up though :)

Down on the right side of the level there is a flower which is placed on the tree... could fix that!

The left end of the tree also has a attachment as if it should be connected to a tree above it... which should be fixed maybe?! :)

Right side of the road is a flower to close to the sand tiles. Could fix that also I believe!

I donīt like the start of the waterfall... should do something about that as it is to straight. And one part of the waterfall is just coming out from the air it seems.

Exept of that is it quite good... use a more varity of grass tiles and donīt make them so centralized... the place where the grass is higher you could add some detail on.

I guess that is the most relevant things to change. Nice that you try with a mountain level, those are great for tiling practice... good luck ^_^

Spectre1337
02-24-2002, 11:29 AM
Originally posted by lordhelmut
What ya guys think about the start of my first ever! MOUNTAIN!
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joseyisleet
02-24-2002, 12:39 PM
-=Josey=-
This is just me, I suck at levels, but, I'd add a few ledges on your "mountain". I mean, hell, you don't see a mountain without ledges do you?

darkriders_p2p
02-24-2002, 01:22 PM
ya where the water comes from the cave you might want to do something about it, it looks wierd

zell12
02-25-2002, 05:46 AM
ack, you deleted my post >.<
Anyway, read meh last one it gives great advice :o

lordhelmut
02-26-2002, 03:27 AM
fixed it =D thanks guys for the comments

zell12
02-26-2002, 03:44 AM
Well, post your level again ;)

lordhelmut
02-26-2002, 06:56 AM
I just fixed tile errors, not grass. Thats how I like grass

And the waterfall was like that cuz it was a image. I fixed that too

zell12
02-26-2002, 08:32 AM
umm... ok

Ultima_P2P
02-26-2002, 11:10 AM
Nice, But as others have said it needs som improvment.