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Jman9912-P2P
01-27-2002, 05:12 AM
can u rate these lvls for me i made them pretty fast but cant think of what to add to them thanks

Jman9912-P2P
01-27-2002, 05:15 AM
and this one

Oxy-Moron
01-27-2002, 05:40 AM
Looks like you put more effort into the houses than the surrounding ground on both of them, so I'll focus on them.

First One: Top building- Get rid of all the blue tiling on it and replace it with something that fits the brick/sandstone wall pattern. I like the entrance to the house, but the blue just ruins it. Bottom building - House just looks funky. The skull-statues in front always ruin things for me, since they're so ugly. Also, the shape of the house leaves little interior design, with such an awkward shape. Take into consideration what will go inside the house... one oddly laid out room? Actual Level- The cliffs don't work at all since you didn't continue them on the right side. Choose one pathway per level, two doesn't look right, IMO. Put a little more effort into the grass tiling, as well.

Second: Again, skull thing = ugly house. Doesn't fit in at all with the two other houses in the level. You have the one brown-house connecting into the skull house as well, which looks rather poor. Change the skull house's tiles and things will improve. Bottom house - I like it actually. I think it might look a bit more interesting with nothing but wooden poles on the roof, but that just might be me. Actual Level - You bunched up your grass detail here too much. Spread it out more evenly. Unstraighten that dirt path in the bottom, as well. Last gripe, the small bridge on the left, it appears to be leading through a tree. Never a good design choice.

Overall, a decent effort. 5/10.

Jman9912-P2P
01-27-2002, 05:46 AM
lol i made those quick but thx here r some my other owner made (hes like co owner actually)

Jman9912-P2P
01-27-2002, 05:48 AM
here
(staff made)

konidias
01-27-2002, 05:50 AM
Originally posted by Jman9912-P2P
here
(staff made)

Ugh.. whatever you do, don't use that sign.. it's such a 2k1 ripoff it makes me ill. :(

Jman9912-P2P
01-27-2002, 05:50 AM
yea thats true its temporary im gonna create our own unique signs we're just using those for place value like

Oxy-Moron
01-27-2002, 05:58 AM
:(

The entire level reeks of 2k1.

You either need to make new tree top gifs or learn to blend them better. The actual detailing in the level is pretty good (though the house in the tree = evil), but there's some minor stuff I had to point out...

Red Circle = Tile/Blending Error
Black = EVIL GFX

Kino
01-27-2002, 06:04 AM
Hey, it's Jared on Kino's postthingy...thx for taking the time to view my level....i will edit those changes...and will cahnge the sign

thomasward
01-27-2002, 07:00 AM
In that second level posted by Jman9912-P2P, don't those top two houses remind anyone of Graal 2001 :confused:

Wes2000
01-27-2002, 07:42 AM
Originally posted by thomasward
In that second level posted by Jman9912-P2P, don't those top two houses remind anyone of Graal 2001 :confused:

I agree, they do look a lot like 2k1 houses, also they look like the houses on Babylon to me.

Jman9912-P2P
01-27-2002, 07:58 AM
ok if they seem like that ill change em

LiVeToDiE
01-27-2002, 09:10 AM
thats such a ripoff of g2k1

thomasward
01-27-2002, 12:48 PM
I don't think those houses remind me of G2k1's ones, they ARE G2k1 ones...the terrorist/counter terrorist game houses.

vsignasv
01-28-2002, 03:33 AM
the house tiling needs to be re done

Jman9912-P2P
01-28-2002, 05:17 AM
i said i would change them lol no one will listen