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Wes2000
01-27-2002, 02:38 AM
If you can, please help me.

Androk2k1
01-27-2002, 02:52 AM
Add more Grass tiles around level... more detail... and it'll be cool

Wes2000
01-27-2002, 02:57 AM
Also, this one

Oxy-Moron
01-27-2002, 03:10 AM
First One: Lack of detail in the top half. Small tile error with the flower in the middle of the pathway. In the bottom right, poor use of swamp tile. Not a bad level by any means, but just nothing impressive.

Second: Nicely made pathway with a good amount of detail. The houses kind of bug me though. The top one is just a bit plain, the second one down seems to have some tile errors in the brick pattern, and... what's up with the third one? O_o Aside from the houses though, good level.

Wes2000
01-27-2002, 06:48 AM
Yea, I stink at houses... Can anyone help me?

Oh, about that small house its kind of like a shed or something.

Gohan43331
01-27-2002, 06:55 AM
Originally posted by Wes2000
Oh, about that small house its kind of like a shed or something.

I doubt there's anything that small that can fit there...but anyways...

I'm not the best level maker in the world, but if you fool around long enough you get it ;)

Gohan

Wes2000
01-27-2002, 06:57 AM
How about these changes?

Wes2000
01-27-2002, 07:02 AM
other lvl:

Oxy-Moron
01-27-2002, 07:21 AM
First One: All the gripes I had were fixed fine. There isn't anything wrong with the level persay and it shows a decent level of effort, but again, it isn't anything special. It just needs something to better fill it...

Second: The houses are both improved (though the shed still.... it's not even as large as a player ><). You might want to stray from the usual "houses are rectangles or squares" pattern and make the outsides more elaborate. Again, nothing wrong with them, just nothing impressive. Just experiment some more with designs.

Wes2000
01-27-2002, 07:26 AM
okay thanks =D ill work on it and post one tonight or tomarrow