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OutlawP2P
01-15-2002, 07:47 AM
If you don't think it is good maybe lemme know how I can improve on it

Boozy_Bravo
01-15-2002, 07:49 AM
2/10

OutlawP2P
01-15-2002, 07:54 AM
why is it bad, or should i just not try to save it

Androk2k1
01-15-2002, 08:11 AM
VERY little datail... try putting trees... bushes... rivers... swamp etc

SkooL
01-15-2002, 08:13 AM
The level is very bad.
You are lacking many parts to an outside level.

Kagero
01-15-2002, 08:27 AM
Originally posted by OutlawP2P
If you don't think it is good maybe lemme know how I can improve on it

Why is part of that water white?

OutlawP2P
01-15-2002, 08:37 AM
transparency or something i guess, ok ill try adding more detail or something or maybe i should just stop trying to make levels

Torankusu
01-15-2002, 08:42 AM
Originally posted by OutlawP2P
i should just stop trying to make levels keep on.

spi
01-15-2002, 09:06 AM
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yoshee15
01-15-2002, 10:45 AM
Very very little detail, lacks everything of a good outside level

kp_p2p
01-15-2002, 01:02 PM
its a nice start. like the others so harshly mentioned, you need a little more detail. but as a start that level isn't lookin too bad. it shows that you were at least trying to make a complicated level with different heights and stuff like that... the grass tiles aren't too boring, but need more diversity. you need to add maybe a river that goes from the top left of the screen to the water part down in the lower right that maybe goes into a waterfall and goes down?

thomasward
01-15-2002, 07:35 PM
Originally posted by OutlawP2P
Re: Is this any good?

Ummmm...no

BARGAD
01-15-2002, 08:28 PM
Originally posted by OutlawP2P
transparency or something i guess, ok ill try adding more detail or something or maybe i should just stop trying to make levels

If it is one of your first levels I say it is good. You could practice a bit with the tiles. It looks a bit to straight and a bit to few tiles. But Im sure you can improve that ^_^

/Gori