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TDK_Admin1
11-15-2001, 08:21 AM
Ok I would like some feedback on a level I made for fun. If you are going to criticize it please tell me what I could do to improve it. I only spent about 20 minutes on it and I know myself that I could improve upon it. Thank you.

Brad2
11-15-2001, 08:24 AM
Originally posted by TDK_Admin1
Ok I would like some feedback on a level I made for fun. If you are going to criticize it please tell me what I could do to improve it. I only spent about 20 minutes on it and I know myself that I could improve upon it. Thank you.

the house is ugly
the guy with no head is ugly
its kind of bland as well

Jerom
11-15-2001, 08:27 AM
Bad swamp tiling.
H8 4 New Tree Tiles(not your fault on that part).
The house tiles, in the front, sorta don't look right. The pillar tiles you used, don't fit when overlapped like that, just make one pillar for one collum.
Dirt thingies are nice, accept I prefer that you don't use two different types of trail tiles for them.

TDK_Admin1
11-15-2001, 08:28 AM
Brad - The guy has no head because I loaded it from my older graal that doesn't have the webgifs...I was in a hurry. And you said exactly what I DIDN'T ask for...WHY IS IT BLAND? Also, WHY IS THE HOUSE UGLY? People on the forums don't seem to read posts before they respond.

Brad2
11-15-2001, 08:51 AM
Originally posted by TDK_Admin1
Brad - The guy has no head because I loaded it from my older graal that doesn't have the webgifs...I was in a hurry. And you said exactly what I DIDN'T ask for...WHY IS IT BLAND? Also, WHY IS THE HOUSE UGLY? People on the forums don't seem to read posts before they respond.

you wanted criticism you got it partner

Raven
11-15-2001, 11:34 AM
It ok just give that d00d his head back and why is there that thing from a fence just there no connected to n e thing else?

Thak2
11-15-2001, 10:40 PM
I think the house looks good, though it does look a little out of place in the level.

TDO2000
11-15-2001, 10:59 PM
The Level looks empty and the house doesn't look good and out of place...
add more details...

yoshee15
11-16-2001, 12:32 AM
Plain.

TDK_Admin1
11-16-2001, 10:38 AM
Ok about 4 people now have said it is plain...but tell me what to do to NOT make it plain..like what should I add?

Raven
11-16-2001, 10:45 AM
maybe another house some more trees some NPCS you know the usual

nyghtGT
11-16-2001, 11:12 AM
Originally posted by TDK_Admin1
Ok about 4 people now have said it is plain...but tell me what to do to NOT make it plain..like what should I add?
i think it looks kinda plain ....

yoshee15
11-16-2001, 11:15 AM
Originally posted by TDK_Admin1
Ok about 4 people now have said it is plain...but tell me what to do to NOT make it plain..like what should I add?

look in the tileset and find different tiles, there are lots.

zeroangel
11-16-2001, 11:18 AM
ugly
:confused: :confused: :confused:
wtf is that?
:confused: :confused: :confused:

:megaeek: i think is a bad level :megaeek:

:spam:

Raven
11-16-2001, 11:25 AM
Originally posted by zeroangel
ugly
:confused: :confused: :confused:
wtf is that?
:confused: :confused: :confused:

:megaeek: i think is a bad level :megaeek:

:spam:

do you have to do that every single post!!!
it is so god damn anoying

yoshee15
11-17-2001, 12:15 AM
Originally posted by Raven


do you have to do that every single post!!!
it is so god damn anoying

he likes emoticons :o

Slaktmaster
11-17-2001, 03:08 AM
its okay, kind of empty tho. add more grass tiles.

Make use of the cut down swamp tiles for the grass and add some more of the usual grass tiles.

-Frank-
11-17-2001, 04:19 AM
Originally posted by TDK_Admin1
Ok I would like some feedback on a level I made for fun. If you are going to criticize it please tell me what I could do to improve it. I only spent about 20 minutes on it and I know myself that I could improve upon it. Thank you. to plain

TDK_Admin1
11-25-2001, 01:05 AM
Originally posted by TDK_Admin1

!!! DOES ANYONE EVER READ MY POSTS?
I said "tell me what I could do to improve upon it" not "tell me what is wrong"

Falcor
11-25-2001, 03:01 AM
Finding tiles that fit together helps

xys
11-25-2001, 04:37 AM
the house looks good, but delete that man

Kumada
11-25-2001, 04:41 AM
Originally posted by TDK_Admin1
Ok I would like some feedback on a level I made for fun. If you are going to criticize it please tell me what I could do to improve it. I only spent about 20 minutes on it and I know myself that I could improve upon it. Thank you.
Needs More bushs and stuff k